Oh wow!
Yet another great instalment! Your work is brilliant I love it!

I love the Stephan/Ryan pairing...in fact i love anything to do with Captain Ryan, he was a character that really stood out to me in the tv series and in my opinion there isn't enough fics out the with him! So bonus points for that ;)

God there is sooo much about your work that i love i don't know where to start!
The description. Strong and vivid, i could praticaly see what you where writing, especialy the caving scenes, something which i knew nothing about till reading your fic.
The characters. The originals are so real, you brought them in and made them a real part of the story not just having them there for having them there. Then there is the characters that i didn't care much for such as say Lester, you now have me wanting more of him, to know what happens to him.
I have to agree with some of the others about the slashy sub-text between Lester and Lyle, it has me interested and wanting more.
And please more S/R smut soon!

There is so much more i have to say but can't think of the right way to put it so i'll leave it at that for now!