This was the fic that hooked me into this fandom so thanks so much for writing it :) (My comments are all over the shop as I read the story back to front when i first found it -sorry!) :)

Hurt/comfort and male bonding are my weaknesses in fic :) so I loved Lyle taking care of Lester when he was having flashbacks.

And I love reading fics where the love and knowledge of a subject really shines through the writing.
I felt I was down in the cave with them. And there were some really scary nightmarish moments :0

It's great as well that you've created and developed the SF guys - they're all fab! :)
The way you develop the Lester/Lyle relationship all through this and in later fics is great - it's cool the the pairing has been taken to everyone's heart over on Primeval Denial :)

Thanks again :)