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fredbassett ([personal profile] fredbassett) wrote2012-10-16 10:51 am
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Drabble, Twa Corbies, Lester, 12

Title : Twa Corbies
Author : fredbassett
Fandom : Primeval
Rating : 12
Characters : Lester, OFCs
Disclaimer : Not mine, no money made, don’t sue.
Spoilers : None
Summary : Written for [livejournal.com profile] primeval100 Challenge 284, Future Predator

“Derek Holness likes you.”

“He’s totally lame.”

“His dad’s got a holiday home in the Loire Valley.”

“Yeah, but Andy Prentiss’s family have got a flat in Miami.”

As his daughters happily pulled apart prospective boyfriends, Lester looked back nostalgically to the days when all they’d talked about was ponies.

His ex-wife had assured him that they were nowhere near as predatory as they sounded, but he wasn’t convinced.

The girls had spent the last hour picking over every adolescent male of their acquaintance like a pair of crows enjoying a tasty feast.

The pony phase had definitely been preferable.

[identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com 2012-10-16 10:09 am (UTC)(link)
Brilliant use of the prompt! And soooooooo teenage girls in full spate ...
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[personal profile] thelibraniniquity 2012-10-16 11:17 am (UTC)(link)
Haha, brilliant!

[identity profile] freddiejoey.livejournal.com 2012-10-16 11:21 am (UTC)(link)
Wonderful! (and eerily like listening to josh and her sister talk to each other these days)

[identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com 2012-10-16 11:59 am (UTC)(link)
LOL! Poor Lester. Teenage girls *rolls eyes*

[identity profile] flaccidduck.livejournal.com 2012-10-16 01:37 pm (UTC)(link)
How really clever!!

[identity profile] bigtitch.livejournal.com 2012-10-16 02:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor Lester and it's only just started!
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[personal profile] goldarrow 2012-10-16 04:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, brilliant.
I read the drabble and snickered at it, then checked the prompt and immediately laughed out loud.
Future predators, indeed!
Loved it!
fififolle: (Primeval - Lester Mammoth BFFS)

[personal profile] fififolle 2012-10-16 05:43 pm (UTC)(link)
He should be giving them tips on how to pick 'em!! LOL. Poor James.

[identity profile] rodlox.livejournal.com 2012-10-16 06:35 pm (UTC)(link)
my Dave muse read that, and is now huddled in the corner, clutching a stuffed toy to protect him.

very nice drabble; poor Lester.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-10-16 06:35 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL, brilliant and poor Lester.

[identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com 2012-10-16 08:24 pm (UTC)(link)
lol! Fun take on the prompt.

[identity profile] stealingpennies.livejournal.com 2012-10-16 08:48 pm (UTC)(link)

Cool promptage. I love Lester in (helpless) parent-mode. Fondly imagine the children vetting his future partners.
ext_27141: (Lester Give Me Strength)

[identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com 2012-10-16 09:39 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL, great use of the prompt! :)

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