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Title : Tenner Says Fiver
Author : fredbassett
Fandom : Primeval
Rating : 12
Characters : Ryan, Jenny, Blade, Kermit, Lyle, Fiver
Disclaimer : Not mine, no money made, don’t sue.
Spoilers : None
Summary : Written for the Primeval100 challenge 309, It's a jungle out there.

The anomaly had appeared in a children’s playground surrounded by high-rise flats.

Jenny was supervising the evacuation while Ryan’s men lounged around on various items of activity equipment designed for people considerably smaller.

They felt it was a fair division of labour.

“Tenner says it’s an ice age,” Fiver said.

“Had that last week,” Blade countered.

“Not had the Cretaceous for a while,” Kermit offered.

“You can’t even fucking spell Cretaceous!”

“Shut your face!”

Lyle stuck his head through the anomaly for a moment then announced, “Looks like the hothouse at the zoo. I reckon Kermit’s closest. Pay up, children!”

Date: 2013-04-08 04:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com
Great scene. Awesome use of the OCs!

Date: 2013-04-13 07:07 am (UTC)

Date: 2013-04-08 04:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] goldarrow.livejournal.com
*snorfle*
Terrific take on the prompt.
Lyle is the best!

Date: 2013-04-13 07:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fredbassett.livejournal.com
*g* Thanks :)

Date: 2013-04-08 04:35 pm (UTC)
fififolle: (Primeval - LMAO)
From: [personal profile] fififolle
LMAO!! Oh boys.

Date: 2013-04-13 07:08 am (UTC)

Date: 2013-04-08 04:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com
LOL Glad the boys are having some fun.

Lyle sticking his head through the anomaly = priceless.

Date: 2013-04-13 07:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fredbassett.livejournal.com
Cutter probably wants to throw the lot of them through an anomaly for keeps at times!

Date: 2013-04-08 07:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bigtitch.livejournal.com
LOL! Awesome! Hee!

Date: 2013-04-13 07:08 am (UTC)

Date: 2013-04-08 07:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rain-sleet-snow.livejournal.com
*sniggers* The last time I heard 'shut your face' was from a bunch of thirteen-year-olds - strangely appropriate. *g* Love the mental images of them lounging around on the playground stuff - please tell me one of them is hanging upside-down from the monkey bars?

Date: 2013-04-13 07:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fredbassett.livejournal.com
Oh absolutely! They're all channelling their inner six-year-old.

Date: 2013-04-08 07:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tli.livejournal.com
Brilliant!

Date: 2013-04-13 07:09 am (UTC)

Date: 2013-04-08 08:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Love the boys having fun. Lyle ftw!

Date: 2013-04-13 07:09 am (UTC)

Date: 2013-04-08 09:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eriah211.livejournal.com
LOL! The boys are so great! ^_^

Date: 2013-04-13 07:10 am (UTC)

Date: 2013-04-08 09:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamer-98.livejournal.com
Hah! I can totally imagine the soldiers getting so bored they'd start taking bets. Very nice!

Date: 2013-04-13 07:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fredbassett.livejournal.com
I imagine they do that a lot.

Date: 2013-04-09 12:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com
hee! And they totally would bet on it.

Date: 2013-04-13 07:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fredbassett.livejournal.com
Absolutely!

Date: 2013-04-09 08:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com

LOL. I hope none of them break the play equipment while sitting on it or trying it out!

Love them bantering


Date: 2013-04-13 07:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fredbassett.livejournal.com
I imagine it's robust enough for a load of overgrown kids.

Date: 2013-04-09 06:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
Lol! Typical blokes!

Date: 2013-04-13 07:11 am (UTC)

Date: 2013-04-09 07:22 pm (UTC)
ext_27141: (Jon Lyle)
From: [identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com
*sporfle* Soldiers'll have a wager about anything, it seems!

Date: 2013-04-13 07:11 am (UTC)

Date: 2013-04-10 04:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stealingpennies.livejournal.com

Nice banter - there would certainly be some 'anomaly books' on. *g* They owe a Jenny a large drink for her efforts!

Date: 2013-04-13 07:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fredbassett.livejournal.com
I'm sure she'll collect that without too much effort!

Date: 2013-04-13 03:51 am (UTC)
celeste9: (PriWriMo: ryan)
From: [personal profile] celeste9
Hee! I love the image of them sitting around on the playground equipment, and trust them to make bets on everything!

Date: 2013-04-13 07:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fredbassett.livejournal.com
Absolutely. It's a bloke thing.

Date: 2013-04-13 01:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com
Hee! Of course there would be a book!

Date: 2013-04-13 03:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fredbassett.livejournal.com
There will be a book on anything, I rather suspect.

Date: 2013-04-13 11:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] clea2011.livejournal.com
LOL! Great fun! :)

Date: 2013-04-14 07:18 am (UTC)

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