Drabble, Out of Order, Lacey, Tremayne, 15

[fredbassett]

Title : Out of Order
Author : fredbassett
Fandom : Primeval
Rating : 15
Characters : Tanya Lacey, Mary Tremayne
Disclaimer : Not mine no money made, don’t sue.
Spoilers : None
Summary : Written for Primeval100 Challenge 127, Oranges Are Not The Only Fruit
A/N : the female Special Forces soldiers, Tanya Lacey and Mary Tremayne are the property of reggietate and rodlox , respectively.

The sign on the door of the women’s shower room proclaimed, OUT OF ORDER, rather smugly, in Norman’s best capital letters.

Tanya Lacey sighed. “Who’s put the old bugger up to it this time?”

“Finn?” hazarded Mary Tremayne.

As there was a small matter of dinosaur guts to deal with, the two women marched into the men’s showers and promptly stripped.

“Roll your tongues back up, boys,” commented Tremayne. “Someone might step on them.”

A moment later, the words, “Scrub my back, will you, Tanya?” almost caused a coronary in the assembled audience.

Fighting the urge to grin, Lacey obliged.

Comments

[lukadreaming.livejournal.com]

ROFL! Brilliant! Bound to be Finn's fault *bg*. Great use of the prompt.

[rodlox.livejournal.com]

the question is, how will they get back at him?

[fredbassett]

Everything's Finn's fault!

[rodlox.livejournal.com]

OH
MY
PRIMEVAL
GOD
!

you captured her perfectly. (both of them, I daresay)

if I don't add this to my Memories, my brain will burn. that's how hot this is. (bad analogy?)

now, if you'll pardon me, I have to roll my tongue back up.

[fredbassett]

Glad you liked it!

Mary is a great character. I'll be very happy to do more with her when the occasion arises.

[bella-farfalla.livejournal.com]

AHAHAHA brilliant! Teasing those boys is almost too easy! hehe

[fredbassett]

Teasing the boys is like dynamiting fish. Too easy!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Yay for them getting there own back on Finn! Very nice.

[fredbassett]

I don't think those two would be fazed by Finn's antics.

[verito295.livejournal.com]

*bg* You go girls! :)

[rodlox.livejournal.com]

...as often as they want!

[fredbassett]

*grins* You don't get to be in Special Forces by being shy!

[rodlox.livejournal.com]

just by being clever

[fredbassett]

And very, very tough.

[slashybits.livejournal.com]

LOL Brilliant!

[fredbassett]

Thanks! This prompt has had me stumped all week!

[szychogirl.livejournal.com]

LOL -- Nicely done :D

[fredbassett]

Thanks. The girls were fun to play with.

[bigtitch.livejournal.com]

That's fab! Hee!

[fredbassett]

*grins*

[nietie.livejournal.com]

Very SF-worthy, girls!!

[fredbassett]

Yep. I couldn't see any of the other girls being that brazen, so it had to be the soldiers!

[rodlox.livejournal.com]

brazen?

[fredbassett]

Unashamed.

[fififolle]

LMAO!! Brilliant :)

[fredbassett]

*grins*

Thanks!

[telperion-15.livejournal.com]

LOL!! Love it!

[fredbassett]

*hugs you*

Thanks, hon :)

[cordeliadelayne]

Hee! Excellent :D

[fredbassett]

Thanks!

[reggietate.livejournal.com]

“Roll your tongues back up, boys,” commented Tremayne. “Someone might step on them.”

Love it :-)

[fredbassett]

Thanks :)

[neferitiel.livejournal.com]

*giggles* poor boys! That must have been a great shock *.* Lovely!

[fredbassett]

but I bet they were all peeking!