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fredbassett ([personal profile] fredbassett) wrote2007-10-07 02:39 pm

Fic, Numb3rs, Spying, Don, Edgerton, R

Title: Spying
Pairing/Characters: Don Eppes, Ian Edgerton
Rating: R
Summary: Watching you, watching me
Word Count: 100
Spoilers: None (I hope)
Written for Numb3rs100, Challenge 127, Spy
Note: My first ever Numb3rs attempt. For munchkinofdoom who lured me here, and for Irena and Emma and all the other wonderful writers in this fandom, thanks for hours of pleasure, guys!
Disclaimer: Not mine, no money made, don’t sue.

Don Eppes leant against the wall of the toilets.

Fuck. He couldn’t believe he’d let Edgerton do that to a suspect..

When did the hell did the end start justifying the means, Eppes?

And just to make matters worse, he was hard. Rock fucking hard.

His hand drifted down to the bulge in his jeans. Shit!

A noise behind him brought his head round sharply.

Edgerton lounged in the doorway, watching him. Looking tired.

Don had rarely seen the sniper with his guard down. It felt uncomfortably like spying.

The barest of smiles on Edgerton’s face told the same story.

[identity profile] master-kogane.livejournal.com 2007-10-07 02:25 pm (UTC)(link)
I is pleased with this! I wants moar of you in this shiny fandom! *sends e-cookies*

>The barest of smiles on Edgerton’s face told the same story.<
Love this line <3

Side note: Had to google Edgerton, because I'm THAT out of Numb3rs ">.>

[identity profile] master-kogane.livejournal.com 2007-10-07 05:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Then make me do it with pr0n! ;D

[identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com 2007-10-07 02:27 pm (UTC)(link)
ooooh. I don't watch this, but like the story.

[identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com 2007-10-08 04:54 pm (UTC)(link)
I've watched a few eps, but hadn't since the first season. Will have to check it out again.
ext_1004: (under pressure 1 - don)

[identity profile] munchkinofdoom.livejournal.com 2007-10-07 02:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Don't forget to post this over at Numb3rs100!

*would love to be a fly on the wall for what happens next*

And on that note, I'm off to bed! *hugs*
ext_1004: (Don - Amused)

[identity profile] munchkinofdoom.livejournal.com 2007-10-08 12:20 am (UTC)(link)
but it depends if I can keep my nerve over something longer :)

Says the woman whose plot bunnies chant in unison, 'Epic! Epic! Make it an epic!'... *g*

[identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com 2007-10-08 05:42 pm (UTC)(link)
I think that Fred is trying to shoo all her epic fic bunnies in my direction. Possibly in the hope that 3Y will be even longer than it appears it's going to be.

[identity profile] elysium1996.livejournal.com 2007-10-07 02:47 pm (UTC)(link)
welcome to our lovely fandom!

I am pleased with my #2 (munchkinofdoom) for bringing you over. Must give her some kudos but she always ends up in trouble so I easily forget...

Any whoooo.. love this fic the last 2 lines are like gold.

[identity profile] irena-adler.livejournal.com 2007-10-07 04:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay, fred numb3rs fic! Such strong, interesting characterization in 100 words!

[identity profile] dana-serenity.livejournal.com 2007-10-07 05:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Number only just aired over here, so I'm pretty sure I don't know Edgerton yet.

Other than that: kick-ass writing!

[identity profile] neur0vanity.livejournal.com 2007-10-07 06:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Awesome! Very good work here.
ext_27141: (Agent Don)

[identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com 2007-10-07 07:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, Numb3rs fic! Yay!

For rather obvious reasons, Edgerton is the character I feel I know the least, but you captured him (and Don!) really well here. Lovely.

[identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com 2007-10-07 07:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooooh. I don't have a clue who Edgerton is, but Don sounded right. Interesting little drabble.
ext_1004: (under pressure 1 - don)

[identity profile] munchkinofdoom.livejournal.com 2007-10-08 12:23 am (UTC)(link)
Lou Diamond Phillips... *drool*

I really need an Edgerton icons...

[identity profile] entangled-now.livejournal.com 2007-10-08 11:40 am (UTC)(link)
Yes! Dirty spying Edgerton is made entirely of win! Filthy little drabblet, and I love it.

[identity profile] entangled-now.livejournal.com 2007-10-08 04:17 pm (UTC)(link)
I know what you mean, I felt quite accomplished when I wrote numbers fic for the first time too! It's such a nice place as it turns out!!

And like you I've been quietly adoring the show for a while without doing much about it damn scheduling mostly to blame for that! But also the fact that poking into new fandoms is always scary, and I find Charlie excruciatingly hard to write even though he's my favourite!

But now you're in the fandom! You rock! You deserve your gin!!

[identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com 2007-10-08 05:47 pm (UTC)(link)
This is the voice of your evil subconscious, and it is telling you to write Charlie porn.

[identity profile] entangled-now.livejournal.com 2007-10-08 06:16 pm (UTC)(link)
*bemoans lack of evil familial connection*

*puts more rum in the tea*

[identity profile] entangled-now.livejournal.com 2007-10-08 06:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Evil Alchoholic Hair!Porn Conjunction.

Sounds like some sinister phase of the moon/planets...we better hurry up and write some hair!porn then I suppose!

[identity profile] entangled-now.livejournal.com 2007-10-08 05:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah I got a C in GCSE maths, my brain just does not work that way. It's afraid of numbers! I would love to do a blatant hair!porn PWP I think I might just eventually have to throw myself into it!

*brings own rum to the party, bemoans current lack of hair!porn*

[identity profile] entangled-now.livejournal.com 2007-10-08 06:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, god we're going to break mathematics if we try Charlie pov, this in no way qualifies me to write the math parts.

I think we should just both write hair!porn and if we screw up any possible maths then smart people can point and laugh at us and we will not share our alcoholic beverages!!

[identity profile] entangled-now.livejournal.com 2007-10-08 06:34 pm (UTC)(link)
we will remember to remove the s from the end of maths, when talking to our transatlantic chums. GO US!

I've already trained myself to do this, I think. Since the only reason I mention maths usually has to do with Numbers! Probably the only reason I'll use the word 'vector' as well...and that totally hasn't developed an air of slight dirty-ness....

[identity profile] emmademarais.livejournal.com 2007-10-17 07:32 am (UTC)(link)
*cough*Hair porn*cough*

Just in case some inspiration would poke the muse a bit... /evil grin/

[identity profile] entangled-now.livejournal.com 2007-10-17 08:17 am (UTC)(link)
It's always a good day for hair!porn, and I'm always up for inspiration via fic!

[identity profile] leda_speaks.livejournal.com 2007-10-10 01:16 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh, very nice! And those last two lines are *killer*!

[identity profile] byrons-brain.livejournal.com 2007-10-14 04:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmmmmm, I love the angst!