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fredbassett ([personal profile] fredbassett) wrote2010-11-25 08:20 pm

Drabble, Fire and Sleet and Candle-Lighte, Otherworld Investigations Series, 12

Title : Fire and Sleet and Candle-Lighte
Author : fredbassett
Original Fic : Otherworld Investigations Series
Rating : 12
Characters : Briana Wakelin, Dennis Smith
Copyright Notice : These characters are mine, all mine.
Spoilers : None
Summary : Written for the original fic challenge, Candles. This is my choice from another line for the Wild Card on the Bingo square.
A/N : I am aiming to write a series of drabbles or ficlets set in my original fic ‘verse for weekly prompts.

I like working with fire. It’s saved my life several times.

Candle light, moon bright,

I reached out and touched the match to the wick.

Watch me, guard me,

The flame flared, guttered for a moment in a draught and then took hold.

This night, every night,

I took a deep breath and concentrated on the small, flickering fire. It grew stronger and brighter.

Keep darkness away, keep evil at bay,

“You can trust fire,” I told my Apprentice. “It’s your friend. Remember that.”

Candle light, moon bright.

Dennis grinned and flourished a small lighter and a box of matches.
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[identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com 2010-11-25 08:53 pm (UTC)(link)
These drabbles really are lovely! :D
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[identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com 2010-11-25 09:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Clever you! I must admit I was wondering if that was original, or a poem or something that I wasn't recognising... *sheepish grin*

[identity profile] tay-21.livejournal.com 2010-11-25 09:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Cool. The prayer/chant part was really cool here, especially when juxtaposed with the character's actions. Very nice.

[identity profile] grondfic.livejournal.com 2010-11-25 09:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Yays! Dennis!

[identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com 2010-11-25 11:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Gorgeous! Very evocative . . .

[identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com 2010-11-25 11:10 pm (UTC)(link)
I can't do verse at all!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2010-11-26 12:03 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely drabble, great universe.

[identity profile] canadian-jay.livejournal.com 2010-11-26 01:25 am (UTC)(link)
Oooh! Cool! Quite lovely.

[identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com 2010-11-26 08:34 am (UTC)(link)
You know, Dennis has me worried!

It is a lovely poem though.
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[personal profile] fififolle 2010-11-26 09:18 am (UTC)(link)
Oooh, an apprentice! He seems like a handful.
Very evocative drabble, love that spell.
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[personal profile] fififolle 2010-11-26 09:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Who knew research was so complex?!! :)

[identity profile] reggietate.livejournal.com 2010-12-01 12:48 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL! I like that last line :-) Magic with 21st Century practicality.

[identity profile] kerry-louise.livejournal.com 2011-05-06 08:15 pm (UTC)(link)
ooh I love this one! the weaving in of the spell worked really well!