fredbassett

Ooooh, that was good. Smut-free action adventure rules. Lots pf great tension with Lester and the caving stuff, and great descriptions of the underground sumps and stuff. I'm not normaly that claustrophobic, but your fic is definitely prodding those sort of fears. And I still can't believe how much you're making me like and care about Lester.

And how much do I love what you're doing with Connor? (imagine huge wide spread arms indicating how much at this point - fisherman 'it was *this big*'style).

'Merry'! *happy bouncing* I was right! Still think I know what Stephen's nickname is, still looking forward to finding out.

Can't think of a favourite bit right now, but I did have to laugh at the bit where Ryan and Stringer are standing around in the visitor centre and 'trying to look non-threatening'. *Giggle*

And absolutely no S/R angst? In fact, no Stephen, full stop. But loads and loads of plot, so no complaints at all about lack of S/R relationship, angsty or otherwise.

Definitely looking forward to seeing how this ends now (and then hopefully how it continues in the next story arc?)