Date: 2007-07-17 10:43 pm (UTC)
I read this yesterday, but then failed to comment because it was very late at night and I was tired. Sorry about that.

Anyway, just read it again, and it made rather more sense (possibly I was too tired yesterday). I know someone else has said something similar, but I got a bit confused about the dive thing with Lyle, but it made more sense on a second reading and with the explanation you gave in the comments.

I love what you're doing with Helen, and I thought you got Cutter's reactions to what she did spot on. Nice moments with Kermit not being able to look at Ryan as he delivers Helen's message, and all the bits with various people not quite being able to look at various other people in the room. Great scene, and good characterisation all round.

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