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Title : The Final Countdown
Author : fredbassett
Fandom : Primeval
Rating : 18
Characters : Lester
Disclaimer : Not mine, no money made, don’t sue.
Spoilers : None
Warning : Some violent images
Summary : Written for [livejournal.com profile] primeval100 challenge 281, This Means War

Lester stared out over the high walls of the compound.

The killing zone was brightly lit, but they were nearing the last of their fuel, so soon the lights would go out.

Beyond the deliberately scorched earth the predators prowled ceaselessly, but they hadn’t attached the refuge for 98 days, nor had his people done anything to disturb the fragile truce, if truce it was.

But the foraging party was late returning and Lester was worried.

When the first severed head came flying over the wall he knew it meant war.

A final war they had little chance of winning.
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Date: 2012-09-24 10:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com

Eeeek that was...very vivid and scary!


Date: 2012-09-24 10:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com
Oh, now, should you fancy writing a longer story around this ...! Very stark and very intriguing.

Date: 2012-09-24 10:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] freddiejoey.livejournal.com
fabulous apocalyptic imagery!

Date: 2012-09-24 11:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] natchris.livejournal.com
When the first severed head came flying over the wall he knew it meant war.

Brilliant drabble.

Date: 2012-09-24 11:33 am (UTC)
goldarrow: (Stephen Watchful)
From: [personal profile] goldarrow
Oh, meep.
Scary imagery!

Date: 2012-09-24 11:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joshinator.livejournal.com
This is really epic!

Date: 2012-09-24 12:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bigtitch.livejournal.com
Oh noes!

*hides behind sofa*

Date: 2012-09-24 01:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com
Very good, thanks.

Date: 2012-09-24 01:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] entorien.livejournal.com
*Hides behind the sofa*

O_O

Scared now!

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] entorien.livejournal.com - Date: 2012-09-24 08:21 pm (UTC) - Expand

Date: 2012-09-24 02:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eriah211.livejournal.com
*shivers*

A little chance is still a chance, I don't think Lester would give up just yet.

Great drabble, very vivid.

Date: 2012-09-24 05:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aunteeneenah.livejournal.com
Ahhh, I don't have an angry!Lester so will use a pissed-off!Connor. Wow, amazing images. Yeah, I'd vote for more of this.

Date: 2012-09-24 05:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggietate.livejournal.com
*meep*

But Ryan's on his way with a rescue party, right? *g*

Date: 2012-09-24 06:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
*eek* Very vivid.

Ryan and Lyle will be arriving soon with the rescue party, yes?

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From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com - Date: 2012-09-24 08:39 pm (UTC) - Expand

Date: 2012-09-24 06:56 pm (UTC)
ext_27141: (Croissant?)
From: [identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com
meepmeepmeep!

(Although did you mean attacked rather than attached?)

Date: 2012-09-24 07:00 pm (UTC)
thelibraniniquity: (Default)
From: [personal profile] thelibraniniquity
Love the imagery.

Date: 2012-09-24 08:06 pm (UTC)
clea2011: (Lester suit)
From: [personal profile] clea2011
Oooh, fabulous! And I agree with Luka, a longer story would be great, this is a very interesting idea.

Date: 2012-09-24 10:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gowarily.livejournal.com
This is epic!

Date: 2012-09-25 03:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamer-98.livejournal.com
Yikes! Very harrowing.
Edited Date: 2012-09-25 03:26 am (UTC)

Date: 2012-09-25 05:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] judithjohn.livejournal.com
EEEEEEKKKKKKKK!!!!!

Terrific!

Date: 2012-09-25 06:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com
Oh no, I hope it's a bad dream.

Date: 2012-09-25 08:47 am (UTC)

Date: 2012-09-25 07:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
meeeeeep! That's a scary drabble.

Date: 2012-09-26 06:04 pm (UTC)
fififolle: (Primeval - bellhop of doom)
From: [personal profile] fififolle
Oh! Those predators are horrible!!!!
*whimper*
Not sure I want to know *all* of this story! *hides*

Date: 2012-09-27 03:14 pm (UTC)
celeste9: (primeval: lester)
From: [personal profile] celeste9
Ooh, scary! Great drabble.

Date: 2012-09-29 03:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com
Ouch! Really vivid! And as usual, I want to know more!
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