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Title : Big Bird
Author : fredbassett
Fandom : Primeval
Rating : 12
Characters : S1 Team, plus Finn
Disclaimer : Not mine (except Finn), no money made, don’t sue.
Spoilers : None
Summary : Written for the Primeval100 challenge 328, University
A/N : Imagine the title character on top of here

“It looks like a proper university,” Finn said admiringly.

“Neo bloody Gothic of the worst order,” Cutter sniffed.

“I can’t take the shot from this distance,” Stephen commented.

“We’re attracting a lot of attention, Professor,” Ryan warned.

“We need a bigger cordon, Captain,” Claudia instructed.

“We could maybe try the good old ball lightning line,” Connor suggested.

“It won’t explain the sodding great big bird.”

“Have you seen the size of the seagulls in Bristol city centre, Finn?” Abby pointed out.

“Good point, ma’am.”

The pteranodon perched on top of the Wills Memorial Building continued to pose for the cameras.

Date: 2013-08-19 06:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com
Brilliant dialogue! I shall be sniggering at Cutter's comment all night ...

Date: 2013-08-19 06:59 pm (UTC)
goldarrow: (Default)
From: [personal profile] goldarrow
*snorfle*
Love the dialogue! Everyone's comments were so perfectly matched to their personalities.
I actually laughed out loud at Abby's, and the idea of the pteranodon posing for the cameras. Oops.

Date: 2013-08-19 07:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bigtitch.livejournal.com
LOL! It's a bloody big tower!

Date: 2013-08-19 07:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rain-sleet-snow.livejournal.com
*sporfles hopelessly*

Date: 2013-08-19 09:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Great lines and love the pteranodon posing for the cameras.

Date: 2013-08-19 09:33 pm (UTC)
cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] abby maitland)
From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
Hee hee, oh dear!

Date: 2013-08-20 01:56 am (UTC)

Date: 2013-08-20 09:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com

When I read the title, I thought you were doing a crossover with Sesame Street!

I love the image of the team all standing there trying to work out what to do, while the bird has a fine old time on its new roost *G*

Date: 2013-08-20 09:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggietate.livejournal.com
Lol, this is brilliant :-)

Date: 2013-08-20 01:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com
Take off your kit, Stephen. That might distract the watchers *vbg*

Date: 2013-08-20 06:02 pm (UTC)
fififolle: (Primeval - Finn/rifle OTP)
From: [personal profile] fififolle
LOL! Things high up can be a terrible pain *g*

Date: 2013-08-20 08:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamer-98.livejournal.com
LOL, nice!

Date: 2013-08-21 11:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stealingpennies.livejournal.com

And the team shows how they work together like a well-oiled machine. Oh...

Date: 2013-08-21 06:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ebonyfeather.livejournal.com
Love the dialogue- great drabble!

Date: 2013-08-21 06:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eriah211.livejournal.com
LOL! It looks like they are still going to keep discussing it for a long time...

Date: 2013-08-24 10:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com
Hee! Love the seagulls line!!!

Date: 2013-08-26 04:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
Oops! That one might take a bit of explaining.

Date: 2013-08-27 09:04 pm (UTC)
clea2011: (Default)
From: [personal profile] clea2011
Bloody seagulls - Abby has a point! :)

Great dialogue :)

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