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Title : Loyalty
Author : fredbassett
Fandom : Primeval
Rating : 12
Characters : Becker/Lester
Disclaimer : Not mine no money made, don’t sue.
Spoilers : Minor for 3.6
Summary : Written for [livejournal.com profile] comnena39 who wanted this pairing and something snarky, slightly fluffy and post season 3 episode 6. Congratulations on submitting your thesis!

Lester looked up and saw a black-clad figure lounging in the doorway of his office.

“The overtime budget was exhausted last month, Captain.”

“Chocolates.”

“I beg your pardon?”

“Or maybe flowers. Yes, I think flowers would be nice. Might stop my flat looking quite so sterile.”

“Have you been drinking?”

“Champagne. That’d go really well with the chocolates and the flowers.”

“Becker, I am beginning to have serious doubts about your sanity.”

“Well, you told me not to expect a kiss.”

“Don’t pout. Anyway, I didn’t know you cared.”

“Yes, you bloody well did,” grinned Becker. “But Christine Johnson didn’t.”

Date: 2010-09-21 10:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com
Fine snark, m'dear, with a hint of fluff!

Date: 2010-09-21 10:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] misura.livejournal.com
*goes teehee! at that last line*

Lovely mix of snark and fluff.

Date: 2010-09-21 10:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggietate.livejournal.com
Hee! Nice one! :-) Pouty Becker is fun.

Date: 2010-09-21 01:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] canadian-jay.livejournal.com
*howls*

This is PERFECT!

Date: 2010-09-21 02:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joereaves.livejournal.com
Lol, love the last line :D

Date: 2010-09-21 04:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] comnena39.livejournal.com
Absolutely perfect, thank you!

I do feel slightly guilty in liking Becker so much, it's kinda like cheating on Lyle. But they both bring out the best fluffy snark in Lester!

Date: 2010-09-21 04:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eriah211.livejournal.com
Aaaww, pouty!Becker surely is irresistible ^_^

Date: 2010-09-21 04:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rusty-armour.livejournal.com
Wonderful dialogue and a wonderful 3.6 post-ep ficlet! :-) I love the way Becker demands chocolates and flowers because Lester told him not to expect a kiss. *g* Oh, and that last line is perfect!

Date: 2010-09-21 05:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bigtitch.livejournal.com
Lol! Nice snark there!

Date: 2010-09-21 05:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] madcatt82.livejournal.com
Ooh, these two do snark fabulously well together!! *g*

Date: 2010-09-21 06:49 pm (UTC)
fififolle: (Primeval - Lester too sexy)
From: [personal profile] fififolle
OMG!!! That's so adorable *squee*
I love the last line so much!

Date: 2010-09-21 07:17 pm (UTC)
ext_27141: (Becker Badass)
From: [identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com
*squees* Lovely fluffy snark!

We really need more Becker/Lester fic based on that 3.6 moment :)

Date: 2010-09-21 11:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] comnena39.livejournal.com
Yes please!
I am more than happy to be an adoring fan girl for all authors writing Lester/Becker stories of any length.

*bats kittenish eyelashes* (I'm aware cats don't have eyelashes, but euelids just doesn't sound as good)

Date: 2010-09-23 11:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] comnena39.livejournal.com
Yes I had, didn't I comment on it? Oops! *runs away to make restitution*

Date: 2010-09-21 07:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com
LOL at the last line.
I love a pouting Becker :D

Date: 2010-09-21 07:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Oh hell yes! Love this! Snark, fluff, that residual feeling of "yey we won". Cracking drabble.

Date: 2010-09-21 08:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
hee! *pets pouty!Becker*

Date: 2010-09-21 08:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
Becker and his 'big gun' *grin*. I turned this picture into a jigsaw one afternoon when I was bored as well, lol!

Date: 2010-09-21 10:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Love the slightly fluff snark. Mmm, that last line has potential *pokes for more* *vbeg*

Date: 2010-09-25 02:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mysteriousaliwz.livejournal.com
Love pouty!Becker and the degree of personal, um, loyalty that Christine never suspected *g*

Date: 2011-02-07 07:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neferitiel.livejournal.com
Huffy Becker!!!!! *cute overload*

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