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fredbassettTitle : Do One, Teach One
Author : fredbassett
Fandom : Primeval
Rating : 18
Characters : Stephen, Clone!Nick
Disclaimer : Not mine, no money made, don’t sue.
Spoilers : Episode 3.3
Warning/Advert: Pissing! (Note that I do not say watersports. *g*)
Summary : Written for![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
elfinessy for the ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-community.gif)
primeval_denial Christmas Kink Challenge. And yes, she really did ask for this!
Nick was out of danger.
The ARC was a mess.
The clone had attached itself to Stephen like a lost puppy.
It had been a long day and he desperately needed a piss. He’d really rather do it without those ever-curious blue eyes fixating on his cock, but it didn’t look like privacy was going to be an option.
The clone hadn’t left his side all day and Stephen had refused to allow anyone to lock the poor thing up like a stray dog or a criminal, which is how he’d ended up in the loos, being watched intently while he was about to take a leak.
“Does that make the pain down here go away?” The clone gestured vaguely in the direction of his own abdomen.
Oh Jesus, had Helen not even taught it – him – how to pee?
Stephen took a deep breath and nodded. “Just do what I’m doing, OK?” He unzipped his jeans, freed his cock and tried to pee. It took him a minute relax enough, but when he did finally manage to start he just sighed went with the flow, so to speak.
The clone watched him finish and zip up again, a look of concentration on its face. Then it – he, damn it! – brought his own cock out and stared at it.
“Point it that way,” Stephen said helpfully. “And relax, you’ll find it helps.”
With a look of intense concentration, the clone stared down at his cock, now pointed obediently at the porcelain.
Nothing happened.
“I don’t know what to do!” The words were quietly spoken but contained a world of frustration.
Stephen stepped up behind him, flipped open the button on the waistband of the clone’s trousers and applied gentle pressure on his abdomen. A sharp hiss of indrawn breath told him exactly how full the poor thing’s bladder was and how much even that gentle pressure must have hurt.
Stephen pressed again and murmured, “Just let it go.”
With another gasp, the clone did exactly that and Stephen held his cock while a stream of warm urine started to emerge. He kept gently massaging the clone’s abdomen until the stream of piss finally dried up. When applying more pressure failed to produce any sign of discomfort, Stephen shook the drops off the other man’s cock and put his clothing to rights.
The clone gave that small, vulnerable smile that never failed to make Stephen’s heart clench in his chest and said, “It doesn’t hurt now.”
Stephen smiled back. “Good.”
Now all he needed was a bit of time on his own to deal with an ache of an entirely different kind.
Author : fredbassett
Fandom : Primeval
Rating : 18
Characters : Stephen, Clone!Nick
Disclaimer : Not mine, no money made, don’t sue.
Spoilers : Episode 3.3
Warning/Advert: Pissing! (Note that I do not say watersports. *g*)
Summary : Written for
elfinessy for the primeval_denial Christmas Kink Challenge. And yes, she really did ask for this!Nick was out of danger.
The ARC was a mess.
The clone had attached itself to Stephen like a lost puppy.
It had been a long day and he desperately needed a piss. He’d really rather do it without those ever-curious blue eyes fixating on his cock, but it didn’t look like privacy was going to be an option.
The clone hadn’t left his side all day and Stephen had refused to allow anyone to lock the poor thing up like a stray dog or a criminal, which is how he’d ended up in the loos, being watched intently while he was about to take a leak.
“Does that make the pain down here go away?” The clone gestured vaguely in the direction of his own abdomen.
Oh Jesus, had Helen not even taught it – him – how to pee?
Stephen took a deep breath and nodded. “Just do what I’m doing, OK?” He unzipped his jeans, freed his cock and tried to pee. It took him a minute relax enough, but when he did finally manage to start he just sighed went with the flow, so to speak.
The clone watched him finish and zip up again, a look of concentration on its face. Then it – he, damn it! – brought his own cock out and stared at it.
“Point it that way,” Stephen said helpfully. “And relax, you’ll find it helps.”
With a look of intense concentration, the clone stared down at his cock, now pointed obediently at the porcelain.
Nothing happened.
“I don’t know what to do!” The words were quietly spoken but contained a world of frustration.
Stephen stepped up behind him, flipped open the button on the waistband of the clone’s trousers and applied gentle pressure on his abdomen. A sharp hiss of indrawn breath told him exactly how full the poor thing’s bladder was and how much even that gentle pressure must have hurt.
Stephen pressed again and murmured, “Just let it go.”
With another gasp, the clone did exactly that and Stephen held his cock while a stream of warm urine started to emerge. He kept gently massaging the clone’s abdomen until the stream of piss finally dried up. When applying more pressure failed to produce any sign of discomfort, Stephen shook the drops off the other man’s cock and put his clothing to rights.
The clone gave that small, vulnerable smile that never failed to make Stephen’s heart clench in his chest and said, “It doesn’t hurt now.”
Stephen smiled back. “Good.”
Now all he needed was a bit of time on his own to deal with an ache of an entirely different kind.
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Date: 2011-01-04 03:12 pm (UTC)This was really sweet.
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Date: 2011-01-04 03:47 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2011-01-04 03:25 pm (UTC)And yay for the angst at the end *g*.
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Date: 2011-01-04 03:49 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-01-04 03:26 pm (UTC)Loved the focus on the clone, and after our other discussions about Stephen on my blog thread about having read Primeval: Shadow of the Jaguar, glad to see a bit of focus on him. :)
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Date: 2011-01-04 03:50 pm (UTC)I'm very fond of the clone as a character. And Stephen is a huge focus character for me, as he's someone I use a lot as a POV character.
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Date: 2011-01-04 04:06 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2011-01-04 04:36 pm (UTC)But what is Stephen going to do about his own ache now? *bg*
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Date: 2011-01-04 04:40 pm (UTC)Damn those biting bunnies!
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Date: 2011-01-04 05:14 pm (UTC)Poor Clone!Nick... Bad!Helen
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Date: 2011-01-04 07:01 pm (UTC)Love the vulnerability of the clone and Stephen caring for it - it's started me thinking what Stephen would make of the clone if he and Nick were both still alive and had to deal with it :-)
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Date: 2011-01-04 07:19 pm (UTC)I could well be tempted into more clone fic at some point. The bunnies have started to bite.
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Date: 2011-01-04 08:44 pm (UTC)*cough* Though it does of course leave the door open for Stephen teaching the clone *other* things he can do with his dick...
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Date: 2011-01-05 08:31 am (UTC)Glad that all three of them are still alive - just think of the fics you can write with two Nicks AND Stephen!! *makes begging eyes*
////The clone had attached itself to Stephen like a lost puppy.////
Awwww - The clone has great taste and appreciates Stephen ;)
Great start to what I hope is a series...
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Date: 2011-01-15 05:48 pm (UTC)And I loved you Nick!clone too :D
Oh, and the end was fantastic :D
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Date: 2011-01-16 12:34 pm (UTC)*melts*
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Date: 2011-06-04 07:56 am (UTC)Clone!Nick is lovely, and bloody good for Stephen!
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Date: 2011-08-18 08:28 am (UTC)This was my first 'clone' story and boy was it special. *g*
Lovely stuff!
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