Drabble, If At First.... Becker/Danny, 15

[fredbassett]

Title : If At First…
Author : fredbassett
Fandom : Primeval
Rating : 15
Characters : Becker/Danny
Disclaimer : Not mine, no money made, don’t sue.
Spoilers : None
Summary : Written for Primeval100 Challenge 200, Past Prompts, and Challenge 17, Chat Up Lines

Becker pulled off his teeshirt and dropped it onto the bench.

Danny leaned against the lockers, making no attempt to disguise the fact that he was staring at Becker’s chest.

Trousers and underwear followed suit until Becker stood naked, doing his best to ignore the fact that Danny’s eyes had never left his body during the entire process.

He grabbed a towel and headed in the direction of the communal showers.

“Nice arse, soldier boy.”

Becker rolled his eyes. “You need to work on your chat up lines, Quinn, and don’t call me soldier boy.”

“Nice dick?” said Danny hopefully.

Comments

[lsellersfic.livejournal.com]

Hee! Trust Danny to get the last word!

[fredbassett]

It seemed in character for him!

[joereaves.livejournal.com]

lmao. Oh Danny!

[fredbassett]

*g* That's our Danny boy!

[bigtitch.livejournal.com]

LOL! Brilliant! I love Danny being subtle!

[fredbassett]

He's good at subtlety. Not.

[nietie.livejournal.com]

Go, Danny! *vbg*

[fredbassett]

He's clearly on a promise now. *g*

[telperion-15.livejournal.com]

That one will definitely work! *g*

[fredbassett]

He thinks so!

[jaynedoll.livejournal.com]

Becker's just playing hard to get, he loves it really.

[fredbassett]

LOL, yes, I'm sure he does.

[smokeygirl19.livejournal.com]

LOL! Captures both characters from canon nicely! This was funny!

[fredbassett]

Thanks!

[zoi-no-miko.livejournal.com]

*giggles madly* WELL PLAYED, QUINN. <3

Love this, it's definitely "them". <3

[fredbassett]

Glad you think so!

[tay-21.livejournal.com]

LOL! That's sooooo Danny.

[fredbassett]

I miss Danny!

[mizzsy.livejournal.com]

haha, Don't worry, if Becker pretends he doesn't love you, your chat up lines will still work on the CGLG fangirls *bg*

[fredbassett]

Becker's only pretending, I'm sure.

[lukadreaming.livejournal.com]

Heh! Typical Danny, getting the last word *g*.

[fredbassett]

Oh yes, that's our CGLG. *g*

[x-bellaitalia-x.livejournal.com]

LOL.

Subtle as a brick, that's the Danny we know and love!

[fredbassett]

Yep that's our Danny!

[http://users.livejournal.com/scarface_/]

LMAO! Oh Danny ♥

[fredbassett]

*g* Danny is such fun to play with.

[reggietate.livejournal.com]

He's never going to win any awards for subtlety, is he? :-)

[fredbassett]

Nope, never!

[eriah211.livejournal.com]

ROFL!
"You need to work on your chat up lines, Quinn"
Oh, Becker, don't you see he is trying? It's Danny we are talking about, he can't be more subtle.

[fredbassett]

LOL, he's definitely trying!

[adafrog.livejournal.com]

lolol Love it.

[fredbassett]

Thanks :)

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

LOL, love Danny's attempt at subtle. Full marks for trying, though.

[fredbassett]

It was a good try. *g*

[quoththewriter.livejournal.com]

Hee, that's our Danny for you! Always getting the last word. I love Becker nonchalantly brushing him off, even though we all know what Becker's really telling him to do is follow up on those lines. (;

[fredbassett]

Oh yes, he'll definitely succumb to Danny's undoubted charms!

[jooles34.livejournal.com]

*tries to hide smirk. Fails*

[fredbassett]

*smirks with you*

[ebonyfeather.livejournal.com]

So very Danny; subtle as a rock.

Loved this.

[fredbassett]

Oh yes, that's our Danny!

[cordeliadelayne]

*sporfles madly*

[fredbassett]

*g*

[dopeydora-67.livejournal.com]

Lol, brilliant ;-)

[fredbassett]

Thanks!

[taricha.livejournal.com]

Hee hee, oh Danny and your complete lack of tact... *rolls eyes*

Adorable!

[fredbassett]

*g* Thanks!

[deinonychus-1.livejournal.com]

lol, typical Danny. Mmmmm... naked Becker.

[fredbassett]

This drabble seems to have been surprisingly popular!

[neferitiel.livejournal.com]

*giggles madly* I missed Danny! *.*

[fredbassett]

Me too!!