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Title : First Disobedience
Author : fredbassett
Fandom : Primeval
Rating : 12
Characters : Becker, Stephen
Disclaimer : Not mine, no money made, don’t sue.
Spoilers : None
Summary : Written for [livejournal.com profile] primeval100 Challenge 246, Fall From Grace

The predator snuffled the air and took a step forward, saliva dripping from its jaws.

Becker cradled his shotgun across his shattered knees, but it was mangled beyond use. Much like his legs.

Stephen stepped out into the harsh sunlight.

With a shake of his shoulders, two raven-black wings unfurled and threw a dark shadow over the injured man.

He’d been sent to ensure the captain did not survive this encounter but Stephen had never been very good at following orders.

With a howl, the predator turned and fled.

He’d just have to come up with a very good excuse.

Date: 2012-01-19 03:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tay-21.livejournal.com
HEE! I have a feeling this prompt is going to give us a lot of wing!fic. :-D Very nicely done. And very lovely images there. :-)

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From: [identity profile] tay-21.livejournal.com - Date: 2012-01-19 10:43 pm (UTC) - Expand

Date: 2012-01-19 04:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kerry-louise.livejournal.com
ooh there should be more of this *g*

Date: 2012-01-19 04:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com
Awesome AU!

Date: 2012-01-19 05:08 pm (UTC)
thelibraniniquity: (This Is A Becker Icon)
From: [personal profile] thelibraniniquity
Wonderful imagery!

Date: 2012-01-19 05:17 pm (UTC)
fififolle: (Wings - armpit)
From: [personal profile] fififolle
tut, tut, Stephen!! *g*
Mmmm wing!fic yay :)
rrrrr
(and poor Becker, ouch)
Edited Date: 2012-01-19 05:18 pm (UTC)

Date: 2012-01-19 06:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rain-sleet-snow.livejournal.com
I don't know whether to be really pleased that Stephen saved Becker or really concerned by what's going to happen next...

Date: 2012-01-19 07:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spirited-lizard.livejournal.com
Oh, surprising! Didn't expect that! Great!

Date: 2012-01-19 07:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggietate.livejournal.com
Yay! for disobedience :-) Well done, that angel!

Date: 2012-01-19 07:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Ohh, great use of the prompt. Go Stephen! and meep for poor Becker.

Date: 2012-01-19 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] freddiejoey.livejournal.com
Glorious imagery!

Date: 2012-01-19 07:50 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] samueljames
Love wingfic and love Stephen saving Becker.

Date: 2012-01-19 07:52 pm (UTC)
clea2011: (Default)
From: [personal profile] clea2011
Yay! Very nice :D (This is one of those "I want to read what happens next" type drabbles!)

Date: 2012-01-19 08:37 pm (UTC)
ext_27141: (Stephen)
From: [identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com
Well that was unexpected! :)

Date: 2012-01-19 08:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
oooh, that was cool. Although, ouch for poor Becker!

Date: 2012-01-19 10:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com

Oooo - dark angel?

LOL at the not following orders. Very intriguing!

Date: 2012-01-19 11:46 pm (UTC)
cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] armed!becker)
From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
A lovely image!

Date: 2012-01-20 12:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamer-98.livejournal.com
Nice! Love the idea of angel!Stephen saving Becker.

Date: 2012-01-20 03:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] auntypam.livejournal.com
Stephen may be a dark Angel but he's still an Angel*G*

Date: 2012-01-20 07:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ebonyfeather.livejournal.com
Love that image of Stephen with black wings.

And yay for him disobeying and saving Becker.

Date: 2012-01-20 08:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] talliw.livejournal.com
Oh, Stephen as a dark angel. Very fitting for that prompt.

Date: 2012-01-20 09:51 pm (UTC)
celeste9: (primeval: mussed!becker)
From: [personal profile] celeste9
Wing!fic! With Stephen! It's quite lucky for Becker that Stephen doesn't follow orders, though I am worried what will happen to him!

Date: 2012-01-22 02:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bigtitch.livejournal.com
Ooh - intriguing - is there more in this universe?

Date: 2012-01-24 07:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eriah211.livejournal.com
Who would have known that I would love wing!fic so much? Go, Stephen!

Date: 2012-01-29 03:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com
Wow! Great image.

Date: 2013-06-04 05:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aunteeneenah.livejournal.com
Verrry intriguing. I had not read this until your new fic so, of course, had to read this first. I absolutely love the imagery of a black-winged Stephen disobeying orders and helping a man he did not know. We all know Stephen was never any good at following orders so whomever sent him should have known that. *g*

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