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Title : Fur and Feathers
Author : fredbassett
Fandom : Primeval
Rating : 12
Characters : OC
Disclaimer : Not mine, no money made, don’t sue.
Spoilers : None
Summary : Written for the Primeval100 challenge 317, Gluttony

In response to a burst of noise from the hen coop, Laura Davies rushed outside carrying her shotgun.

She had no intention of losing any more birds to the fox’s gluttonous desire to kill.

She arrived in time to see a tawny shape streaking off, pursued by a brightly-coloured flash of feathers that she’d never seen before.

When the stranger returned, it had a tuft of fur in its oddly-shaped beak.

It was, without a doubt, the weirdest-looking chicken she had ever seen in her life.

But it had done a bloody good job of getting rid of the fox.

Date: 2013-06-03 06:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bigtitch.livejournal.com
Bwahahahaha!!! Great twist!

Date: 2013-06-03 06:59 pm (UTC)
fififolle: (Primeval - LMAO)
From: [personal profile] fififolle
LMAO!!! Poor fox *g* Brilliant drabble.

Date: 2013-06-03 07:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluealbertaskys.livejournal.com
LOL! Bad luck this time fox.

And I'm going to be trying to figure out just what saw that fox off for ages now :).

Fab :).

Date: 2013-06-03 07:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Hee, that'll teach the fox for thinking chickens were easy ;)

Date: 2013-06-03 08:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggietate.livejournal.com
Hee! Nice one :-D

Date: 2013-06-03 10:03 pm (UTC)
goldarrow: (Default)
From: [personal profile] goldarrow
*snorfle*
I'll bet that was one upset fox! Talk about turning the tables. From 'easy lunch' to 'seen off the premises' in one fell swoop!

Date: 2013-06-04 05:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com

Hee - I hope that the new defender of the coop doesn't turn on the chickens or on Laura!

Date: 2013-06-04 11:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com
Hahaha! I love the twist at the end.

Date: 2013-06-04 10:44 pm (UTC)
clea2011: (Default)
From: [personal profile] clea2011
LOL! Brilliant last line, though poor fox!! :)

Date: 2013-06-05 02:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamer-98.livejournal.com
Hee, sometimes the creatures aren't so bad after all. Nice!

Date: 2013-06-07 11:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stealingpennies.livejournal.com

Eek! Nice role reversal. There may be some unusual eggs appearing soon...

Date: 2013-06-08 04:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com
LOL! Go that chicken!!

Date: 2013-06-08 08:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com
I suspect Danny has one of those squirreled away in a back pocket somewhere!

Date: 2013-06-13 05:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ebonyfeather.livejournal.com
LOL- nice one.

Date: 2013-06-14 06:23 pm (UTC)
cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] abby and cutter)
From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
Hee hee!

Date: 2013-06-16 01:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
Lol! Poor fox!

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