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Title : Falls the Shadow, Part 4
Author : fredbassett
Fandom : Primeval
Characters : Ryan, Stephen, Claudia, Cutter, Connor, Lyle
Rating : 18
Disclaimer : Not mine (except Lyle), no money made, don’t sue
Spoilers : None.
Summary : The children are still missing and tempers start to fray.
A/N : The remainder of this series can be found here
 

“You saw a woman watching our house ………..watching my child …………and you didn’t see fit to tell me?” Amanda Thornton’s voice shook with anger.

Her husband met the angry blue eyes and looked uneasy. “I saw her twice, maybe three times, only once near here. I didn’t think much about it until after the incident with Tom. Then I remembered I’d seen her a few months ago as well, so I told Calum. I thought it was just my paranoia, Amanda, but better safe than sorry. He said he’d get his lads to keep an eye out ……..”

“Safe? We weren’t safe, were we, Greg? Vicky wasn’t safe, either. If she was safe, she’d be here now, not God only knows where ………….”

God only knows when, thought Stephen, fleetingly.

This wasn’t going to work. They couldn’t do their jobs here, not with Ryan’s ex-wife in their faces every minute, poison dripping from her fangs each time she opened her mouth. He threw a quick glance at Claudia.

“Mrs Thornton,” said Claudia, in her best trust me I’m a civil servant voice, “your husband did the right thing. Everyone has done the right thing so far. There’s no reason to suspect that Helen Cutter is in any way connected with Victoria’s disappearance …..”

She was here. He,” pointing at Ryan, “was involved as well. Now you bring that woman’s husband into my house and you try to tell me this is your team! What the hell is going on, Miss Brown? I want a solicitor, and I want one now!”

Stephen winced. They had enough trouble on their hands without adding lawyers to the mix. Unless they were experts in predicting the appearance of magnetic fields or bloody good with a gun. The latter was always a useful skill around anomalies in his experience.

“For fuck’s sake, Mandy, what do you expect a solicitor to do? Join a search party at three hundred quid an hour? Serve me with another bloody injunction or just referee the fights? They weren’t much good at that last time, were they?”

“Don’t swear! And don’t call me Mandy!”

Ryan laughed, the sound like a knife scraping stone. His eyes were hard as he opened his mouth to reply.

Claudia forestalled him.

“Mrs Thornton, Professor Cutter’s team has the full backing of the Home Office,” or should I say the three people in Government with half a clue what’s going on? But maybe we’d better draw a discreet veil over that, like we do over everything else. “He has the necessary experience to deal with this so I suggest that we let him, and everyone else, work to bring your daughter back. You look exhausted, you really should try and get some rest. I’ll tell you the minute we have some news, I promise ……….”

Claudia gestured to the door and something in her tone contrived to inject a welcome note of finality into the exchange. The young policewoman promptly used it as an opportunity to usher Amanda Thornton out of the room.

Cutter ran an hand through his hair, “Thanks, Claudia. I’m not sure any of us could have ………” remembering Greg Thornton’s presence, he came to an abrupt halt and looked apologetic.

The other man just looked tired. “Put up with that much longer?” he hazarded. “Her daughter’s missing, Professor Cutter. Remember?” He glanced at Ryan, a look of uncertainty in his eyes. “Tom? Can we talk in private?”

Ryan followed the other man out of the room and up the stairs, reluctance showing in every movement he made. He walked like he was heading towards a firing squad.

Greg Thornton opened a door at the end of a long corridor and stood back, letting Ryan enter first.

The soldier stopped dead, taking in every aspect of the room in one quick, hard glance. Then he drew in a deep breath and inhaled the scent of his daughter. Talcum powder and leather.

He almost laughed.

The riding tack was still spread out on the floor, only half polished. A dirty rag lay next to a large trophy, next to an even larger fluffy white rabbit.

Then he nearly cried.

He’d sent her that rabbit for her birthday, four months ago. He’d expected it to have gone straight in the bin, with all the other presents and cards he’d sent but that hadn’t stopped him sending them.

“She’s still your daughter, Tom,” said the other man in a voice barely above a whisper. “She needs to know her daddy loves her. Whatever her mother may think. When I found out you were still sending stuff, I made sure she got it. Amanda hates it. It’s the only fucking thing we row about. So I’m going to shut this door, and you’re going to tell me what the fuck is really going on. Then that way, I might just manage to keep my wife off all our backs long enough for you lot to find Vicky and the others and bring them back. Just do me one favour, Tom. Don’t slag her off. Whatever you do, don’t slag her off. She’s my wife now.”

Ryan half-turned, exhaling a long, pent-up breath and for the first time since entering the house, he met someone else’s eyes. “Do me a favour too? Call me Ryan. Only Amanda calls me Tom.” Amanda, and Helen Cutter.

And with the white rabbit cradled on his knees, the soldier proceeded to tear the Official Secrets Act into small pieces and tell Greg Thornton as much as he needed to know. The bits that he hadn’t already gathered from Claudia, that is. It rather looked like they were beyond the point of trying to cover this one up.

At the end of the story, the younger man walked over to the window, and leant his forehead against the cold glass. “What fucking chance have they got, Ryan? Tell me that.”

Somewhere outside in the teeming rain, a dog howled.

Ryan shrugged. He didn’t think I haven’t a fucking clue would sound very inspirational.

The howl turned to a yelp.

Ryan’s hand went instinctively for his gun.

Date: 2008-01-31 06:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
Meep! And awwwwwwww.... sweet. The mental image of Ryan with a fluffy bunny stuffed toy on his knee was just wonderful, and so sweet and sad given the circumstances, and made me want to hug him so much.

Go Claudia, at least someone in the building has a sense of diplomacy. And the new husband is actually quite cool, I like him.

You're doing the clifhanger thing again. And I bet you're not going to post more for a few days yet. Grrr.

*waits impatiently*

Date: 2008-01-31 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
I happened to be checking my f-list at the point when you posted. And then my chicken kiev got slightly overcooked because I was about to go and check the oven when I found fic and got distracted.

Long series? Brilliant. And I don't mind the chapters being short. If anything, i think my chapters are too long, so don't worry about length, it's what happens within the word count that counts (and the more I look at that sentence, the more I think there's some sort of inuendo going on!).

Admit it, you like cliffhangers really. *sharpens claw and grins evilly*.

Date: 2008-01-31 06:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bigtitch.livejournal.com
GAH!! I'm loving this so much but the cliff-hangers are killing me. You are a complete and utter fic tease and there is a special hell for people like that!

Date: 2008-01-31 07:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
"promise to have a special porn-fest, with added bonus kinky behaviour"

Woohoo!

Date: 2008-01-31 10:38 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com
Really liking the dynamic between all the characters in this - all the tension and snarking and downright meanness!

And I think Greg Thornton could become a valuable ally...

*camps out on f-list until Sunday*

Date: 2008-02-01 04:09 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-02-01 10:09 am (UTC)
ext_1004: (Primeval)
From: [identity profile] munchkinofdoom.livejournal.com
The howl turned to a yelp.

Ryan’s hand went instinctively for his gun.


Four parts in and we still don't know what the Monster of the Week is! You're taking suspense to a whole new level, you know that, don't you?

Anyways...

I take it that Greg Thornton has taken over his own writing duties? *veg* Because it is coming over loud and clear that he has no intention of remaining a mere plot device to explain how Mandy is living in that posh house on a Special Forces Captain's alimony payments. *g*

I love it when you get all porny plotty!

Date: 2008-02-01 06:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] michael-the-car.livejournal.com

Surfacing after the month from hell... who, in the name of all that is holy, invented self assessment anyway? And made the last filing day the same day tax credit's first specified date? Please say Lester hasn't transfered Director of HMRC to his current job, I'd hate to put the blame on him.

Sprogette has been pointing me to your page and shrieking 'Stephen' in my ears for the last week, but even that failed to penetrate the veil of exhaustion until now. And all I can say is 'yippeee...!!'

Mind you, Sprogette does have her good points, she even made me a large G&T to settle down and read this with... will try for something more coherent later, I promise.

Date: 2008-02-01 08:28 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] silentflux
So... I just totally mainlined your fic this week... and wanted to say, wow. Just wow. I'm am absolutely in love with this series that you've created. You've made everyone on the show so alive and I can't get over how much I adore it, how much the action makes me sit up and pay attention, how hot it is, how exciting... it's been a while since I've read fic where action is written and it's not just description, but you can feel the urgency. You so, so rock. And now I'm sitting here, with a serious jones for more... please? *bats eyelashes*

Date: 2008-02-01 08:55 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] silentflux
*snags the cookies and eye ointment* Thanks, sweetie! This series was therapy for after work ;) It definitely lifted my mood this past week...

Oh! The comment!porn ;) I've been reading those as well... skimming as it were... last night was a good night for it as I'd just driven 4 hours on what should've only taken me 2.5 hours and I needed the porn. I was lucky that you'd decided to do that :) And I'm planning to go back and leave fb and possibly take a stab at it.

*grins* The kinks there are awesome, and I should totally go and pimp my comm somewhere to all you amazing Primeval authors to get some Primeval fandom over there... we're prompting right now at [livejournal.com profile] rounds_of_kink... you know, if you feel the need to go and prompt ;)

Date: 2008-02-01 08:56 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] silentflux
...and I totally forgot to mention, even though I practically jumped for joy... yay for more fic!!!

Date: 2008-02-05 12:07 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] sethra2000.livejournal.com
Woohoo. Another part, I check everyday... 50 million times *g*. Poor Ryan, I'm glad that Greg hasn't got it in for him, I hope they get the kids back ok, or Ryan might homicidal... then probably suicidal. The boys need some comfort snuggle time.

Date: 2008-02-23 04:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dopeydora-67.livejournal.com
Yay for Greg, making sure that Vicky got the cards and gifts from Ryan. *Pats him on the back*

Date: 2008-04-02 12:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlybird42.livejournal.com
Better late than never. I'm finally getting the opportunity to catch up with your lovely Primeval fic. I can't believe how much I missed it. I finally got caught up with January, might've been quicker but had to keep stopping to wipe the drool off my keyboard. Can't wait to read the rest.

Date: 2008-04-02 11:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlybird42.livejournal.com
And it will, of course, be avidly read by me .. eventually. I will be treating myself to another marathon session next week in order to catch up with February's offerings, more if my eyeballs don't melt and drop out first,

Date: 2008-06-02 08:28 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] fififolle
Okay, that's it. If Amanda Mandy didn't give Vicky stuff that Ryan was sending, that's it. She's toast. I *really* hate that. The ending of this chapter was just so chock full of awesomeness, I can't begin to say. Yay Greg. Decent chap.

Date: 2008-06-04 10:09 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] fififolle
Amanda was a brilliant character. A victim of circumstances, perhaps, and yet, not quite redeemed, despite her pan throwing and fortitude, but her acceptance of Stephen was touching. I'm still torn ;) Giving up sugar in tea may be just too much to forgive.
Plus, if she poisons Vicky against Ryan, or hurts Greg, I would cross the Kirkstone Pass personally and remove her brain through her nose with a very small spoon! You know, if she was real... *coughs*

Date: 2009-02-25 01:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarah-lilzfl.livejournal.com
Umm, is it very OTT of me that I'm practically crying after reading Ryan & Greg's exchange? *meep* The fluffy bunny toy... *dabs at eyes ineffectually*

“You saw a woman watching our house ………..watching my child...
I really, really, hate that bitch...

poison dripping from her fangs each time she opened her mouth
Haha, so apt!

Then he nearly cried.
AWWW! NOES!

The howl turned to a yelp.

Ryan’s hand went instinctively for his gun.

*bounces excitedly*


Date: 2009-05-15 09:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Hugs Ryan.. yay for Greg and someone please sedate Mandy - she's not helping... and not giving Vicky the presents.. grrr

Date: 2010-12-01 06:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neferitiel.livejournal.com
Oops! Some has a problem with a dog ^^

Date: 2011-12-08 04:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkhorse-99.livejournal.com
Eeepers Meepers. Greg is turning out to be shockingly likable. It probably did Ryan a world of good to learn that his cards and letters being passed on to his daughter.

Date: 2012-09-03 11:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kerry-louise.livejournal.com
I really like Greg, he clearly adores Vicky and respects Ryan, which counts for a lot in the current circumstances.

And it's sweet that Ryan sent gifts even when he thought she wasn't getting them.

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