Author : fredbassett
Fandom : Primeval
Characters : Ryan, Stephen, Claudia, Cutter, Connor, Lyle
Rating : 18
Disclaimer : Not mine (except Lyle), no money made, don’t sue
Spoilers : None.
Summary : The children are still missing and tempers start to fray.
A/N : The remainder of this series can be found here
“You saw a woman watching our house ………..watching my child …………and you didn’t see fit to tell me?” Amanda Thornton’s voice shook with anger.
Her husband met the angry blue eyes and looked uneasy. “I saw her twice, maybe three times, only once near here. I didn’t think much about it until after the incident with Tom. Then I remembered I’d seen her a few months ago as well, so I told Calum. I thought it was just my paranoia, Amanda, but better safe than sorry. He said he’d get his lads to keep an eye out ……..”
“Safe? We weren’t safe, were we, Greg? Vicky wasn’t safe, either. If she was safe, she’d be here now, not God only knows where ………….”
God only knows when, thought Stephen, fleetingly.
This wasn’t going to work. They couldn’t do their jobs here, not with Ryan’s ex-wife in their faces every minute, poison dripping from her fangs each time she opened her mouth. He threw a quick glance at Claudia.
“Mrs Thornton,” said Claudia, in her best trust me I’m a civil servant voice, “your husband did the right thing. Everyone has done the right thing so far. There’s no reason to suspect that Helen Cutter is in any way connected with
“She was here. He,” pointing at Ryan, “was involved as well. Now you bring that woman’s husband into my house and you try to tell me this is your team! What the hell is going on, Miss Brown? I want a solicitor, and I want one now!”
Stephen winced. They had enough trouble on their hands without adding lawyers to the mix. Unless they were experts in predicting the appearance of magnetic fields or bloody good with a gun. The latter was always a useful skill around anomalies in his experience.
“For fuck’s sake, Mandy, what do you expect a solicitor to do? Join a search party at three hundred quid an hour? Serve me with another bloody injunction or just referee the fights? They weren’t much good at that last time, were they?”
“Don’t swear! And don’t call me Mandy!”
Ryan laughed, the sound like a knife scraping stone. His eyes were hard as he opened his mouth to reply.
Claudia forestalled him.
“Mrs Thornton, Professor Cutter’s team has the full backing of the Home Office,” or should I say the three people in Government with half a clue what’s going on? But maybe we’d better draw a discreet veil over that, like we do over everything else. “He has the necessary experience to deal with this so I suggest that we let him, and everyone else, work to bring your daughter back. You look exhausted, you really should try and get some rest. I’ll tell you the minute we have some news, I promise ……….”
Claudia gestured to the door and something in her tone contrived to inject a welcome note of finality into the exchange. The young policewoman promptly used it as an opportunity to usher Amanda Thornton out of the room.
Cutter ran an hand through his hair, “Thanks, Claudia. I’m not sure any of us could have ………” remembering Greg Thornton’s presence, he came to an abrupt halt and looked apologetic.
The other man just looked tired. “Put up with that much longer?” he hazarded. “Her daughter’s missing, Professor Cutter. Remember?” He glanced at Ryan, a look of uncertainty in his eyes. “Tom? Can we talk in private?”
Ryan followed the other man out of the room and up the stairs, reluctance showing in every movement he made. He walked like he was heading towards a firing squad.
Greg Thornton opened a door at the end of a long corridor and stood back, letting Ryan enter first.
The soldier stopped dead, taking in every aspect of the room in one quick, hard glance. Then he drew in a deep breath and inhaled the scent of his daughter. Talcum powder and leather.
He almost laughed.
The riding tack was still spread out on the floor, only half polished. A dirty rag lay next to a large trophy, next to an even larger fluffy white rabbit.
Then he nearly cried.
He’d sent her that rabbit for her birthday, four months ago. He’d expected it to have gone straight in the bin, with all the other presents and cards he’d sent but that hadn’t stopped him sending them.
“She’s still your daughter, Tom,” said the other man in a voice barely above a whisper. “She needs to know her daddy loves her. Whatever her mother may think. When I found out you were still sending stuff, I made sure she got it. Amanda hates it. It’s the only fucking thing we row about. So I’m going to shut this door, and you’re going to tell me what the fuck is really going on. Then that way, I might just manage to keep my wife off all our backs long enough for you lot to find Vicky and the others and bring them back. Just do me one favour, Tom. Don’t slag her off. Whatever you do, don’t slag her off. She’s my wife now.”
Ryan half-turned, exhaling a long, pent-up breath and for the first time since entering the house, he met someone else’s eyes. “Do me a favour too? Call me Ryan. Only Amanda calls me Tom.” Amanda, and Helen Cutter.
And with the white rabbit cradled on his knees, the soldier proceeded to tear the Official Secrets Act into small pieces and tell Greg Thornton as much as he needed to know. The bits that he hadn’t already gathered from Claudia, that is. It rather looked like they were beyond the point of trying to cover this one up.
At the end of the story, the younger man walked over to the window, and leant his forehead against the cold glass. “What fucking chance have they got, Ryan? Tell me that.”
Somewhere outside in the teeming rain, a dog howled.
Ryan shrugged. He didn’t think I haven’t a fucking clue would sound very inspirational.
The howl turned to a yelp.
Ryan’s hand went instinctively for his gun.
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Date: 2008-01-31 06:21 pm (UTC)Go Claudia, at least someone in the building has a sense of diplomacy. And the new husband is actually quite cool, I like him.
You're doing the clifhanger thing again. And I bet you're not going to post more for a few days yet. Grrr.
*waits impatiently*
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Date: 2008-01-31 06:30 pm (UTC)I know, the cliff-hangery thing is a Bad Habit! *points finger accusing at cretaceous era dinosaur who started evil cliff-hangery habit of doom*
I have a horrible feeling that this series is getting longer by the minute, but the chapters are shorter than DC, so I'd like to post two a week, if I can. Right up until the point I go back to work and real life intrudes ... *groan, moan*. But I'll try and post Chapter 5 on Sunday, if all goes according to plan :)
Ryan and a cuddly toy struck me as cute, too, which is why it snook in!
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Date: 2008-01-31 07:43 pm (UTC)Long series? Brilliant. And I don't mind the chapters being short. If anything, i think my chapters are too long, so don't worry about length, it's what happens within the word count that counts (and the more I look at that sentence, the more I think there's some sort of inuendo going on!).
Admit it, you like cliffhangers really. *sharpens claw and grins evilly*.
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Date: 2008-01-31 06:49 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-01-31 07:04 pm (UTC)Splendid, I aim to tease. Loads more teasing to come .........
*fails to appologise for teasing*
But this one is proving difficult to work random porn into, so I may have to beg everyone's forgiveness and promise to have a special porn-fest, with added bonus kinky behaviour when this series has worked it's way through my brain.
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Date: 2008-01-31 07:45 pm (UTC)Woohoo!
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Date: 2008-01-31 07:49 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-01-31 10:38 pm (UTC)And I think Greg Thornton could become a valuable ally...
*camps out on f-list until Sunday*
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Date: 2008-01-31 10:42 pm (UTC)The snarking was fun to write :) I shall endeavour to deliver on my promises, honest!
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Date: 2008-02-01 04:09 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-02-01 08:45 am (UTC)Thanks for reading!
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Date: 2008-02-01 10:09 am (UTC)Ryan’s hand went instinctively for his gun.
Four parts in and we still don't know what the Monster of the Week is! You're taking suspense to a whole new level, you know that, don't you?
Anyways...
I take it that Greg Thornton has taken over his own writing duties? *veg* Because it is coming over loud and clear that he has no intention of remaining a mere plot device to explain how Mandy is living in that posh house on a Special Forces Captain's alimony payments. *g*
I love it when you get all
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Date: 2008-02-01 01:05 pm (UTC)Well, we did provide comment!porn elsewhere to make uo for the lack of it here :)
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Date: 2008-02-01 06:14 pm (UTC)Surfacing after the month from hell... who, in the name of all that is holy, invented self assessment anyway? And made the last filing day the same day tax credit's first specified date? Please say Lester hasn't transfered Director of HMRC to his current job, I'd hate to put the blame on him.
Sprogette has been pointing me to your page and shrieking 'Stephen' in my ears for the last week, but even that failed to penetrate the veil of exhaustion until now. And all I can say is 'yippeee...!!'
Mind you, Sprogette does have her good points, she even made me a large G&T to settle down and read this with... will try for something more coherent later, I promise.
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Date: 2008-02-01 08:39 pm (UTC)Poor you, I sympathise, I really do! I had a minor tax nightmare just before we came on holiday, saved partially by the fact that the person who had told me the wrong thing about 6 months ago at least having made a note of it on the file!! Full consequences not yet known, but I live in hopes of avoiding a penalty 'cos the conversation was at least recorded!!
Nightmare time of year for you, hon, but if you want a good laugh, check out the comment!porn thread on my LJ, there's enough kink there to sustain anyone for several weeks!!!!!!1
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Date: 2008-02-01 08:28 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-02-01 08:46 pm (UTC)But you must have made your eyeballs bleed reading that much in a week!!
*offers soothing eye ointment and sustaining cookies*
I've been a bit distracted since yesterday having huge fun with the comment!porn thread on my LJ which has produced some gorgeous kink and drabblets from a wide variety of people, but I hope to post part 5 of this series on Sunday and then settle down to more writing next week (I have up to part 8 more or less in the bag, but the rest is still on my "to do" list). But it's so great when someone picks up the series and enjoys it, so thanks soooo much for letting me know you're reading!!!!!
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Date: 2008-02-01 08:55 pm (UTC)Oh! The comment!porn ;) I've been reading those as well... skimming as it were... last night was a good night for it as I'd just driven 4 hours on what should've only taken me 2.5 hours and I needed the porn. I was lucky that you'd decided to do that :) And I'm planning to go back and leave fb and possibly take a stab at it.
*grins* The kinks there are awesome, and I should totally go and pimp my comm somewhere to all you amazing Primeval authors to get some Primeval fandom over there... we're prompting right now at
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Date: 2008-02-02 10:17 pm (UTC)I've just got back after a 13 hour drive and have watched Primeval. SQUEE!!!
You should definitely add some comment porn! We do seem to have an awesome amount of kink, particulary gun!kink, which is one of my all time favourites. You're right, some of this definitely should find it's way onto rounds_of_kink. I must check it out! You're welcome to pimp the comm in the comment pron thread if you like, hon, I'm sure you'll find some takers!!
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Date: 2008-02-01 08:56 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2008-02-05 05:15 pm (UTC)I'll try and get another part up for you by the end of the week, to stop you wearing out your poor keyboard :)
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Date: 2008-04-02 10:31 pm (UTC)Lovely to have you back!! There'll be more soon, I hope.
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Date: 2008-04-02 11:44 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-06-02 08:28 pm (UTC)AmandaMandy didn't give Vicky stuff that Ryan was sending, that's it. She's toast. I *really* hate that. The ending of this chapter was just so chock full of awesomeness, I can't begin to say. Yay Greg. Decent chap.no subject
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Date: 2008-06-04 10:09 pm (UTC)Plus, if she poisons Vicky against Ryan, or hurts Greg, I would cross the Kirkstone Pass personally and remove her brain through her nose with a very small spoon! You know, if she was real... *coughs*
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Date: 2008-06-05 02:51 pm (UTC)But your threats may well be enough for her to reach for the bowl and start spooning it in!
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Date: 2009-02-25 01:40 pm (UTC)“You saw a woman watching our house ………..watching my child...
I really, really, hate that bitch...
poison dripping from her fangs each time she opened her mouth
Haha, so apt!
Then he nearly cried.
AWWW! NOES!
The howl turned to a yelp.
Ryan’s hand went instinctively for his gun.
*bounces excitedly*
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Date: 2009-02-25 01:49 pm (UTC)*offers you a clean hanky*
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Date: 2012-09-03 11:28 pm (UTC)And it's sweet that Ryan sent gifts even when he thought she wasn't getting them.
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