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Title : Falls the Shadow, Part 5
Author : fredbassett

Fandom : Primeval

Characters : Ryan, Stephen, Claudia, Cutter, Connor, Lyle

Rating : 18

Disclaimer : Not mine (except Lyle), no money made, don’t sue

Spoilers : None.           

Summary : A connection is made.

A/N : The remainder of this series can be found here

“Fox,” said Lyle, as Ryan entered the kitchen at a run, Greg Thornton hard on his heels.

“You saw it?” the Special Forces captain sounded sceptical.

“Stephen did. It headed off across the yard. He’s gone out with Finn to take a scout round. No point in taking chances.” Lyle bent down and finished his examination of a long rip in the black Labrador’s ear. “Speaking of which, this poor old chap needs stitches.”

Greg sighed. “It isn’t his first run-in with that fox. It took a chunk out of his leg last week. Come on, Harvey, it’s the vets for you again, lad.” He shot a grateful look at Lyle. “Thanks. If your guy with the rifle spots the bugger, ask him to put the damn thing down. It’s caused havoc round here recently.”

No-one spoke until they heard the car doors slam and the crunch of tyres on the gravel drawing away from the house.

“Fox?” Ryan said.

He wasn’t the only one who looked sceptical.

Ten minutes later, Stephen came in through the outside door to the kitchen, running a hand through his wet hair, causing it to stand up in dark spikes. His blue eyes sought out Ryan’s and he was pleasantly surprised to realise that for the first time since entering the house his lover’s eyes hadn’t just slid past him to fix on some undefined point in the middle distance.

“I saw something brown and furry with a bushy tail disappearing into the undergrowth. Looked like a fox.”

“If it looks like a fox and runs like a fox ……….” muttered Cutter.

“…………. it probably is a fox,” finished Stephen, but the vivid blue eyes held unmistakeable traces of doubt. He shrugged and added, “It’s raining pretty hard out there and the mist has dropped big time, but I did see some tracks that I couldn’t identify. I think we need to talk to DCI Richards again. Make sure there’s been nothing going on around here that they haven’t told us.”

Forest of Dean syndrome, as they’d come to think of it.  The seemingly endless capacity of otherwise normal people to either rationalise, or simply ignore even the strangest of events, in the hope of not attracting the wrong sort of attention.

The young Detective Chief Inspector settled himself in a kitchen chair, accepted the coffee Claudia slid over the table to him and looked wary.

Cutter fixed him with a stare that would have had an entire lecture theatre of students hiding under their seats. “You’re holding something back, DCI Richards.”  It was a statement, not a question.

Half an hour later, the DCI looked sheepish. The rest of them looked stunned.

“Why don’t we just put an advert on the tele?” muttered Lyle. “Wanted :  Weird stories. Preferably involving teeth and claws.  Your chance to star in I’m a Palaeontologist, Get Me Out of Here. That’d bring ‘em out of the woodwork.”

And he now knew why Calum Richards had been so quick off the mark with the cover-story he’d thrown at the bird-watcher. Practice. Long practice.

“What is it with you people?” demanded Cutter. “Do you think this sort of thing is normal?”

“Well, it’s hardly a good way to advance your career,” snapped the policeman, defensively. “Please, sir, I think I’ve just seen something that’s meant to have been dead and gone a gazillion years ago. The Chief Constable isn’t known for his interest in science fiction, and the Government doesn’t exactly advertise that it’s got a bunch of dinosaur-busters on call. So we do what we always do out in the countryside: we make the best of a bad job and keep it quiet.”

The kitchen door opened and Connor walked in, carrying his laptop and dripping water all over the tiled floor. “Running out of power,” he remarked. “Have I just missed something interesting, guys?”

“Detective Chief Inspector Richards was just about to start giving us a list of locally known anomaly sites,” said Claudia, brightly. Making a mental note to think about Lyle’s comment later.  Maybe they could come up with something a bit more subtle that might have the same effect.

Connor grinned. “Cool. Give me the details and I’ll enter ‘em onto the database.” He dropped his sopping wet hat on the kitchen table. His nose looked equally damp. “Where shall we start?”

“With dry clothes and a handkerchief?” suggested Claudia, wondering not for the first time what it would take to shake the student’s irrepressible enthusiasm.

*          *          *

Connor flickered his intense dark eyes over to the still-embarrassed policeman and asked, “Any more?”

The DCI shook his head.

Connor grinned.

There were now twelve red dots over-laid on the map on his screen, and for the life of him, he couldn’t see any relationship between them. More data would help, it usually did, but even Connor was now forced to admit that they’d probably dredged everything they could out of Calum Richards’ memory.

The descriptions of the creatures had been vague, but it sounded very much like a motley collection of small herbivores, as well as an alvarezsaurid kept by someone as a pet and passed off as a fancy chicken; a juvenile platecarpus in one of the tarns which had played havoc with the fishing until finally caught and discretely disposed of and a herd of hyracotherium which a group of tourists had mistaken for very small capybaras.

Oh, and according to Calum, one of the local farmer’s daughters had a horse-like creature she was very fond of, but fortunately it was useless over jumps so the local gymkhana had been spared the sight of a merychippus competing for a rosette. Equally fortunately, the farm was one of the most isolated in the area.

“No pattern,” said the student, staring hard at the list. “But the whole area’s as active as a dog with fleas. That’s a good thing, right?”

“Depends if you live round here or not, Con,” said Stephen, casting a wary glance over at Ryan.

The Special Forces captain was looking over Connor’s shoulder at the screen, face impassive, but the hands which gripped the back of the kitchen chair were white-knuckled. “It’s a good thing,” he said, quietly. “It has to be.”

Cutter reached out and rested a hand briefly on Ryan’s arm. “We’ll find her. Hold onto that and don’t let go, man.”

Ryan nodded, but it looked like the movement had been wrenched out of him against his will and his eyes remained bleak.

Nick Cutter fixed the policeman with another hard stare. “I want word put out around here that if anything else happens, we need to know about it immediately. Not next week, next month or never, but immediately. Got that? And if my wife is in the vicinity, I want to talk to her and I really don’t care how you arrange it.”

DCI Richards nodded and reached for his radio.

If the woman was still in the area, they’d have her by the end of the day.

*          *          *

The kitchen of the Thornton’s house was starting to resemble a check-point on a large scale orienteering course in extremely wet weather.

Over the course of the day, the hub of the various activities slowly and almost imperceptibly shifted from the guest cottage to the main house and ended up revolving around Connor and his ever-present lap-top.

In between staring at his database of anomalies and drinking endless cups of coffee, the student had also started keeping track of the activities of both Ryan’s men and the various police officers assigned to them and by lunchtime, it had become the habit of all of them to announce their arrivals and departures for logging.

There were a lot of potential sites to check and they were spread thinly, too thinly in Ryan’s view, but Lester had refused to send more men. The anomaly sites in the Forest of Dean were also reporting high levels of activity and he was keeping Stringer and his team down there, whether Ryan liked it or not. He’d already despatched Abby as back-up for Stringer and the Mitchells and the civil servant had told both Ryan and Cutter, in equally firm terms, to work with what they had and make the best of it.

Connor looked up as a sopping wet Lyle came in through the back door, followed by an equally drenched Ditzy. In response to Connor’s questioning look, the medic shook his head and started peeling off his jacket and tac vest.

The student made the necessary adjustments to his list. “You two taking the next one? It’s up by Kirkstone Pass.

“Fifteen minutes for a brew, then we’ll go.” Lyle stared down in disgust at his clothes. He was soaked to the skin and none of them had more than one change in the van.

“Fifteen minutes in the tumble-drier will do some good,” said a voice from the doorway. “Strip as much off as you want, Jon, it’s a big drier.”

Lyle looked up sharply, the expression on his face not dissimilar to the one he wore when facing something that had been at the head of the queue when teeth and claws had been handed out.

He shook his head. “Tea’ll warm us up.” The lieutenant glanced hopefully at the kettle on a huge range, filling almost half of one wall of the massive kitchen.

“Modest or just bloody-minded?” said Ryan’s ex-wife as she busied herself with mugs. “If it’s the former, you’ve changed.  If it’s the latter, you haven’t.”

Lyle gave an unwilling laugh and started to remove his black fleece sweater and black shirt, leaving behind an equally wet tee shirt of the same colour. He was treated to a hard stare from a pair of red-rimmed blue eyes that had clearly spent a good proportion of the last day and night crying.

With a sigh, he pulled the tee shirt over his head and handed it over. “You as well, mate,” he muttered to Ditzy.

The medic shrugged and followed suit.

“Pour one for me,” Amanda Thornton instructed, as she grabbed an armful of wet clothes and went through to the utility room. As an after-thought, she added, “I don’t take sugar any more.”

Lyle glanced helplessly at Connor and asked, “Where’s Claudia?”

“Talking to the mothers of the other kids.”

“Media?”

Connor shook his head. “Nope. This lot don’t like outsiders.”

“Shame they don’t put up warning signs, then.” Amanda Thornton’s voice was brittle with bitterness. “This place had been on the market for over two years. I’m now beginning to see why. Where’s my husband?”

Connor’s eyes flickered over his computer screen. “With Ryan on Bampton Common, above Haweswater. Looks like one opened there last year. Another possible pterasaur sighting.”

The expression on Lyle’s face became slightly more intent. “Cutter?”

“Somewhere called Potter Tarn.”

“East of Staveley,” Amanda said, automatically. “Nice walks round there in better weather.”

“Stephen?”

“If we’re playing Twenty Questions, it’s my turn,” Conner grinned.

“Conner!” Lyle’s voice had taken on a parade ground edge and his hazel eyes were suddenly sharp.

“Caiston Glen.”

Ditzy shot Lyle a questioning look and received the briefest of nods. The two soldiers started staring intently at the site list. Connor hit two keys and an area map appeared, each possible anomaly marked with a blood red dot.

“What have you found, Jon?” A spark of hope leapt into Amanda Thornton’s pinched face and for the first time softened the ever present hostility.

“Mines,” breathed Lyle. “They’re all near fucking mining sites. It’s the bloody Forest all over again! I knew Bampton Common rang a bell. Haweswater Mine. I helped to haul a trail hound out of a shaft there ten years ago.” He held his left hand out, displaying a puckered white scar behind the knuckle of his little finger. “Bloody thing bit me.”

Whatever the soldier was about to say next was interrupted by the ringing of his mobile phone from the depth of one of the pockets in his tac vest, thrown over the back of one of the chairs.

“Ryan? Where are you? …………No, we’re back at the house. Are your radios working? …………No, I didn’t think they would be. Get back here, we need to talk. I think we’ve got a link between the sites ………… yeh, a link. Mines. Copper. Lead.  The area’s stiff with the stuff. Call the others and get back here. I need to phone Lester.”

Connor looked up from the screen, his face alive with interest, “You’re right!  This is only the second place we’ve found multiple anomaly sites so close together.” He waved his hand at the screen. “How many of these can you identify for definite?”

“I’m not that big on mines, Con. I’ve only played around underground in this area a few times. I remembered Bampton Common because of the dog. But I need to check I’m not barking up the wrong tree …………..” as he spoke, the soldier was hitting one of the buttons on his phone.

“Sir? …………Screw your meeting, I need to run something past you ……….yeah, whatever, ………… You’ve dived in Copper Mines Valley, haven’t you? How well do you know the rest of the area? …………OK, try these names for size, tell me if you recognise any of them ………..”

Lyle started reeling off the list from Connor’s screen, pausing every now and again to listen. When he’d finished, he nodded, hazel eyes still fixed intently on the screen.  “Right, for what good it does us, we’ve got a connection to ore-bearing rock. Same as the Forest. Thanks.” He listened again and a slow grin spread across his face. “I’ll make it up to you when I get back, sweetie. Give my love to the PM.”

Connor winced. He had a hard job, a very hard job, imagining Lyle with Lester, and whenever he tried, something in his brain went scrambling for the reset button pleading for a re-boot. Now was no exception.

He watched a similar look of surprise flash across Amanda Thornton’s eyes before she demanded, “What does it mean, Jon?”

The soldier sighed, “I wish I knew, Mandy. I wish I fucking knew. I’m guessing it’s something to do with the amount of minerals in the rock attracting, or maybe intensifying, the magnetic fields of the anomalies. Connor, am I making sense?”

The student nodded, slowly. “And whenever we’re near them, the radios always foul up.  It happened in the Forest, and it’s happening here. We always end up using our mobiles. And Lester always snarks about paying the bills. So maybe, just maybe ………….”

Connor’s voice trailed off, his words failing to keep up with his racing thoughts.

A bang on the outer door of the kitchen made all of them jump.

DCI Calum Richards walked in, a look of triumph on his face. “There’s someone out here I need you to take a look at, Lieutenant, I’d just like to make sure I haven’t kidnapped an innocent member of the public.”

A moment later, Lyle and Ditzy were out in the yard, freezing rain falling unnoticed on bare shoulders.

Helen Cutter eyed them both up and down, amusement flickering in her dark eyes, “Don’t tell me I’ve interrupted yet another party. What fun you boys do have  …………”

Amanda Thornton started to close the gap between her and the other woman, anger blazing unchecked, “Where’s my daughter …………..?”

Lyle’s arm shot out and he pulled Ryan’s ex-wife to him, feeling tremors of emotion running through her slim shoulders. “Easy, Mandy, leave her to us. Stick our guest somewhere safe, Calum, and don’t take your bloody eyes off her. I’ll talk to her when I’ve got a few more clothes on. And Mrs Cutter knows exactly what happens when she plays dumb around me, so maybe in the meantime she’ll remember where she’s left her manners.” 

The look the soldier gave Helen was cold and calculating. “Believe me, lady, Ryan’s nowhere near as polite as I am when it comes to asking questions. And he’s on his way back here right now.”

Date: 2008-02-07 09:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
Squeeeeee! Plot! Oodles and oodles of lovely plot! I love the whole link with the mines and stuff, sounds like you've been giving quite a bit of thought to the anomalies and what's causing them, and I'm so looking forward to seeing where you're taking this. And the locals keeping prehistoric pets and just keeping quiet about seeing stuff and shrugging it off as just being something that happens and they don't talk about it! Brilliant! And Connor being all centre-of-coordinating-stuff and organised, how cool was that. (memo to me - stop overusing the exclamation mark key).

I'm intrigued by the relationship between Amanda and Lyle as well, it sounds like they knew each other quite well in the past. And she seems a whole lot more civil to him than she is to Ryan, at least.

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Date: 2008-02-07 10:30 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com
Oh, Lyle... *falls at Lyle's feet*

I didn't think anything could top I'm a Palaeontologist..., but then there was this...

“I’ll make it up to you when I get back, sweetie. Give my love to the PM.”

*flails*

Really liked Connor as Command Central - seems like a job he'd be well suited for, actually.

But Ryan interrogating Helen... *shivers in anticipation*

Date: 2008-02-07 10:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
Argh! yes, I was so busy commenting on the plot I forgot to comment on the wonderful "I'm a Palaeontologist..." line, and the conversation on the phone with Lester. Yey for Lyle from me as well.

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Date: 2008-02-07 10:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] comnena39.livejournal.com
I'm very, very new to Primeval (um... 3 weeks? And counting!) But thanks to nice brothers who will sneakily download stuff so I can catch up with my more knowledgeable friends, I'm all caught up. And have therefore been reading any Stephen related fanfic (although not him slashed with Cutter because that just doesn't gel in my head!), or general team stuff I could find and then I found your magnum opus...

I stayed up for an entire night reading it and have been breathlessly following the updates. It is a beautiful universe you have created and I like your original characters - I love Lyle and Lester together! Partially because I like Lester in the show and don't think he is remotely evil, and because I think Lyle sort of falling into a relationship with 'The Witch King' is hysterical.

I actually checked here a couple of hours ago and there was nothing since the third comment porn update, then (I had a new cup of tea ;-)) a random click and here we are part 5! Plot, lots of plot! A rationale behind the anaomalies locations! Barmy country folk! And Lester/ Lyle cuteness!! And a tiny wee hint that the Abby/ Stringer relationship is chuntering along in the background!

Okay, shutting up now and laying off the squeeing, but thank you for writing all this, for the regular updates and sharing with the rest of us.
C

Date: 2008-02-08 03:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com
Great addition. LYLE AND LESTER!!!!

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Date: 2008-02-08 05:51 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] silentflux
YES! More! OMG, I love this story so, so much... seriously. So. Much. Love. But now I need mooore... Please? *bats eyelashes*

Date: 2008-02-08 07:10 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] munchkinofdoom.livejournal.com
Yay!!! Part 5!!! Plot!!! Angst! Cute Connor.. *veg*

I won't rehash what everyone else has been saying, from Connor as Command Central, to the paleontologist comment, to the sheer quirkiness of the locals, to Lyle and his interactions with both Mandy and Lester. This is all lovely!

The angst is wonderful, from Ryan's knuckle-clenching to Mandy's tearstained face, but my favourite bit is probably the local DCI. His reaction to interrogation was masterful. You wrote such wonderful OC's. Which, considering the sheer amount of plot you throw into these things, is vital!

I love your wierd, perverted, plotty little brain, evil twin!

And next? Who gets to Helen first... *veg*

Date: 2008-02-08 10:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bigtitch.livejournal.com
Connor winced. He had a hard job, a very hard job, imagining Lyle with Lester, and whenever he tried, something in his brain went scrambling for the reset button pleading for a re-boot. Now was no exception.
*gurgles delightedly and hugs Connor to her bosom*
I love this so much.
And I want to marry Lyle and have his babies. Maybe we could set up a menage a trois with Ryan.
I want a Lyle icon now.

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Date: 2008-02-08 03:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] irishkate.livejournal.com
Really surprised by how much I love the pairings (all of them) considering I'm a cutter/stephen girl. But I love these stories and wated to say thanks and of course "more"

Date: 2008-02-08 08:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oilybears.livejournal.com
Thought you'd like to know that I'm still lurking and loving it all way too much. Can't wait for the next part.

a merychippus competing for a rosette

That mental pic gave me the giggles - I think I know that girl...

Beer

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Date: 2008-02-09 07:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] michael-the-car.livejournal.com

Finally caught up, and Sprogette is breathing a sigh of relief. I mean, any one wold think I'm a cruel parent.... just because I've been deprived of my 'Stephen'fix recently. (I've only just caught up on the new series, how sad is that?! RL really can interfere sometimes.)

Lots of plot, lots of angst and all I need now is a Stephen lolliop and i will be in heaven.

Date: 2008-02-11 06:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] entangled-now.livejournal.com
I missed one again and had to come back and find it! You're so good at setting up lots of plot. And I love the idea of an entire isolated village and their brief history of dinosaur invaders!

Also...more special forces sitting around in their pants around giant tumble driers please (y'know if there's room in your story and everything!)

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Date: 2008-02-23 05:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dopeydora-67.livejournal.com
Ohhh I would not want to be in Helen's shoes right now *g*

Date: 2008-03-02 08:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verito295.livejournal.com
I started reading your series on friday night thanks to a comment by telperion_15 and I could not put it down for the entire weekend! Omg I completely love all your OC, I hate you for making me fall in love with a pairing I have *no chance* to read anywhere else because *flais* Lester/Lyle is so damn brilliant! You have a fantastic way to develop the plot and your action scenes are brilliant. I'm a Nick/Stephen girl but I can't help myself, I really like the way you write Ryan :) So now that I'm all caught up with this I can sit here quietly, reread all the Lester/Lyle scenes and patiently (I can do patient, honest I can) wait for the next chapter.. Oh and my god I have to say I fell in love with Lyle just a bit more when he dislocated Helen's finger :D

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Date: 2008-03-12 12:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] insomniacs-home.livejournal.com
Oh, I'm all giddy at the thought of Lyle and Ryan beating up Helen. YAR!

Okay, so Amanda's not that bad when she's not around Ryan.
Maybe Stephen and Ryan can have hot sex and melt her brain and she'll be quiet.

Oh, I love love love this.

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Date: 2008-06-02 08:42 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] fififolle
Oh, so fab. I adore Calum Richards, bless him, all those anomaly sites, silly boy, should have 'fessed up sooner.
Any Lyle! *hearts Lyle* All that interaction with Amanda and Lyle was just spectacular. Loved his snap of revelation (not just brawn, eh, Connor?) and conversation with Lester... Mmmmmmm....*drool* Ahaha to Connor's re-boot.

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Date: 2008-06-02 08:54 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] fififolle
Oh, and remind me to always take a sugar in my tea. That was a classic, genius line that made Amanda look a right pain. Trust her to stop taking sugar.

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Date: 2009-02-25 02:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarah-lilzfl.livejournal.com
Forest of Dean syndrome
LOL!

And he now knew why Calum Richards had been so quick off the mark with the cover-story he’d thrown at the bird-watcher. Practice. Long practice.
Ooooh. ^_^

as well as an alvarezsaurid kept by someone as a pet and passed off as a fancy chicken
LOL I would like to hear the explanation the owner gave for that... *g*

spared the sight of a merychippus competing for a rosette
*snorfles*

The kitchen of the Thornton’s house was starting to resemble a check-point on a large scale orienteering course in extremely wet weather.
Oh, so not fun. Not at all.

“You two taking the next one? It’s up by Kirkstone Pass.”
That isn't going to be fun either, unlucky, boys!

“If it’s the former, you’ve changed. If it’s the latter, you haven’t.”
LMAO! Oh, Lyle...

Connor winced. He had a hard job, a very hard job, imagining Lyle with Lester, and whenever he tried, something in his brain went scrambling for the reset button pleading for a re-boot. Now was no exception.
I've run out of internet slang for laughing my head off.

The soldier sighed, “I wish I knew, Mandy. I wish I fucking knew. I’m guessing it’s something to do with the amount of minerals in the rock attracting, or maybe intensifying, the magnetic fields of the anomalies. Connor, am I making sense?”
Well, I'm glad someone has an idea about what the hell anomalies actually are! :P

Amanda Thornton started to close the gap between her and the other woman, anger blazing unchecked, “Where’s my daughter …………..?”
Okay, so I think I've fully registered my hate for the woman, but I must admit what a brilliant character she is.

The look the soldier gave Helen was cold and calculating. “Believe me, lady, Ryan’s nowhere near as polite as I am when it comes to asking questions. And he’s on his way back here right now.”
!!!!! Me thinkers its going to be payback time.

I am enjoying this so much! Can you tell at all? :P

Date: 2009-05-15 09:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Ohh lots of plot and explanations.. love Connor's rebooting and Amanda's shocked look over Lester/Lyle.. and Amanda's coming over nicer with Lyle.. some history here?

Date: 2010-12-01 07:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neferitiel.livejournal.com
Yeah!!!! Way to go Lyle! *.*

Date: 2011-12-08 04:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkhorse-99.livejournal.com
I think they should let Lyle soften her up, then let Amanda interrogate her. That would be nice... with lots of scratching and hair pulling. I love these isolated little communities that you base your stories around, people that would rather deal with random prehistoric creatures than tourists. It's great.

Date: 2012-09-03 11:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kerry-louise.livejournal.com
Uh oh Helen's in trouble... By which I actually mean, hahaha! Suck it up bitch!

Lyle's right, Ryan won't be anywhere like as polite in this case!

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