Drabble, Watching Him Watching Them, 15

[fredbassett]

Title : Watching Him Watching Them
Author : fredbassett
Fandom : Primeval
Rating : 15
Characters : Lester, Jenny, Leek
Disclaimer : Not mine, no money made, don’t sue.
Spoilers : None
Summary : The title says it all!
Written for Primeval100 Challenge, Desire

Oliver Leek shuffled papers and cleared his throat nervously.

Jenny Lewis shot him a sympathetic look.  The man was a creep, but he tried to be pleasant, and she was doing her best to give him the benefit of the doubt.

Lester was unconvinced. He’d spent weeks watching Leek watching others.

Watching his eyes track the sway of Jenny’s hips; watching the way he would stand too close to Connor, a pale, sweaty hand brushing across the young man’s thigh.

James Lester suppressed a growing desire to introduce Leek’s head to a nearby wall, and called the meeting to order.

Comments

[telperion-15.livejournal.com]

*shudders*

Slimy little git - I'm with Lester on this one! *g*

[fredbassett]

Yes, he is yukky, that's for sure.

[fruitbat00.livejournal.com]

Loved it! Such great impact in so few words...

P.S. I am so with Lester on the wall part..:)

[fredbassett]

Thanks :) Slimy Leek is a fun subject to play with.

[lukadreaming.livejournal.com]

Perfect -- tells us all we need to know about Leek *g*. And I favour Lester's way of dealing with the slimy little git :o)

[fredbassett]

I certainly wanted to put his head through a wall!

[lukadreaming.livejournal.com]

I definitely favour it as a way of bringing meetings to order *g*. I think I'll borrow it for work -- or at least fantasise about doing it when meetings get out of hand!

[reggietate.livejournal.com]

LOL! Loved it. Poor Oily Ollie does come in for some stick - mind you, he does deserve it ;-D

[fredbassett]

Yep, no sympathy from me, for sure!

[bigtitch.livejournal.com]

Personally I'd want to introduce Leek to a cheese-grater, but I admire Lester's restraint in these matters.

Great drabble. Says it all in a few words.

[fredbassett]

A cheese-grater sounds good!

[adafrog.livejournal.com]

Love it.

[fredbassett]

Thanks :)

[lil-shepherd.livejournal.com]

Ahah - experience informs, eh?

Go Lester!

[fredbassett]

LOL, I can just see him itching to do that.

Go Lester, indeed!

[torncorpse.livejournal.com]

Grr...Yes. Lester should just smack the little prats head into a wall.

awesome as always.
[good to have you back]

*sends happy/warm thoughts*

[fredbassett]

It would make a satisfactory thwunk.

Thanks. Good to be back, and thanks for the thoughts, I've been feeling them :)

[steamshovelmama.livejournal.com]

Brilliant. Very vivid and I like the comment about Connor. Lester never did like Leek, did he?

[fredbassett]

Thanks. Yes, that was pretty clear from the beginning, and I could just see the annoying little tick perving both Jenny AND Connor. Yuk.

[joereaves.livejournal.com]

I like this.

[fredbassett]

Thanks, I rather enjoy using Leek in fic :)

[entangled-now.livejournal.com]

Very neat way of making Leek look incredibly creepy in just a few words!

[fredbassett]

Thanks! It's the multiple perving that does it, I think.

[entangled-now.livejournal.com]

It is! Proving Leek is capable of being creepy with everyone at the same time (against all laws of physics!)

[rospberry.livejournal.com]

Lester needs to learn that suppressing desires does more harm than good :) Great drabble, luv.

[fredbassett]

He does! A Leek's head shaped hole in an ARC wall would be extremely satisfying.

[cordeliadelayne]

Ew, creepy Leek.

Very nice drabble :D

[fredbassett]

LOL, writing creepy is fun! Thanks.

[x-bellaitalia-x.livejournal.com]

ick. Slimy Leek.

'One pale, sweaty hand'

T'is a most unpleasant image.

Me thinks Lester has the right idea.

[fredbassett]

LOL, I was trying for icky, so I'm glad it worked!

Thanks :)

[deinonychus-1.livejournal.com]

Ewwww! Leek is a nasty, slimy little git. Although I am now having a brief mental image of Leek and Lester and having a proper punch-up, and Lester winning of course.

[fredbassett]

That sums him up perfectly, IMHO.

It would be a fun scrap to watch :)

[byrons-brain.livejournal.com]

LOVE IT!

Please write a Lester/Connor fic ::big puppy dog eye::


::bribes with chocolate cake::

[fredbassett]

OMG, woman, as if I haven't got enough plot bunnies nibbling my ankles!

I'll add it to the list and see what I can come up with.

[byrons-brain.livejournal.com]

I'll love you forever ::plies with chocy muffins::

::feeds plot bunnies speed::

[byrons-brain.livejournal.com]

OMG I've just had this image of Lester/Cutter fighting over Conner...

::plays with plots bunnies and feeds them sugar::

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Creepy Leek.. go on James.. you know you want to.. Leek and Wall would go well together.

[fredbassett]

leek, meet Wall. *grins*

[daxie42.livejournal.com]

Lester notices everything......except the fact that Leek was going to betray them all ;)

[fredbassett]

Yes, I don't think he was expecting that development.

[neferitiel.livejournal.com]

Come on Lester We are with you!!

[fredbassett]

We certainly are!