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Title : Coming Home
Author : fredbassett
Fandom : Primeval
Characters : Lyle, Ditzy
Rating : 15
Disclaimer : None this time, ‘cos they’re mine, but I’m happy to share.
Spoilers : None
Warning : It’s a dark theme, but it did happen.
Summary : Lyle and Ditzy get told where they’re going next.
A/N : Written for the [community profile] primeval_denial  pre-series challenge. For those who want to know, S.R.T. stands for Single Rope Techniques.

 

The gun shot echoed down the shaft, the sound reverberating off the dark limestone walls.

Lyle grinned, aimed his Glock straight upwards and fired off a single shot in reply. At these depths old fashioned methods of communications were simple and unambiguous, and worked better than faffing around with whistles or radios.

He took a last look around the chamber as he was clipping his S.R.T kit onto the rope, and inclined his head in a silent gesture of respect towards the only other occupants of the cave. Not that any of them would notice, but that wasn’t the point.

The light from the open mouth of the shaft, some 200 metres above him, was fading now, casting little more than a faint glimmer onto the loose rubble and leaf debris of the talus slope under Lyle’s boots. The light cast by his LED head-torch was cold and white. A fitting illumination for a tomb that had housed the dead of two wars. Human beings who’d been thrown into the cave with as little ceremony as a farmer disposing of the corpse of a dead animal. Lyle just hoped they’d all been dead before they hit the bottom, but as he’d found one broken body some way apart from the others, he had to admit that was probably a vain hope.

He’d first descended this shaft twelve years ago when he’d helped a team of cavers from the Karst Institute retrieve the bodies of five men, murdered during the Second World War. He hadn’t expected to come back, but at that stage, no-one had expected a second war to ravage these hills either.

“We’ll have you back with your families tomorrow,” the lieutenant said quietly, speaking into the gathering shadows. It wasn’t much, but it was all they could do, and maybe it would help. It might bring someone some closure. Justice would be better, but with the shambles in the Hague still grinding on at a geological pace, he wasn’t holding out much hope for that any more.

They’d come down again tomorrow and haul what was left of the bodies up to the surface. Then that would be it for this trip, and it’d be back to the UK to find out what their next assignment was, and where.

Fifteen minutes later, he wrapped one arm around a convenient tree branch and hauled himself out over the edge of the shaft, crawling far enough away from the open hole so that he could get his gear off in safety.

When Lyle had finished de-kitting, Ditzy grinned and handed him a cold bottle of the local beer. “Got a call while you were fannying around on that last rebelay. New job's come up.”

Lyle tossed his caving helmet to one side and raised a muddy eyebrow. It looked like their next posting had come through. “Somewhere with nice caves? Preferably minus long-term inhabitants?”

To his surprise, the medic nodded. “Forest of Dean, apparently. Makes South Wales or the Mendips a distinct possibility as well. Worst we’re likely to get there is decomposing sheep.”

Lyle finished his beer and swiped what was left of Ditzy’s. “So what’s the bloody catch?”

A week and a half later, he found out.

 

Date: 2008-07-14 09:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
Nice. Very atmospheric little fic.

Worst we’re likely to get there is decomposing sheep

Snigger. That was a bit of an underestimation on their part.

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Date: 2008-07-14 09:52 pm (UTC)
fififolle: (Primeval - (Fredbassett OC) Ditzy)
From: [personal profile] fififolle
*hugs the boys tight*
Jeez, no one should have to do these things. Lyle is a hero. And so is Ditzy.
Heh. Forest of Dean. Very, very good, thanks :) *deep breath*

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Date: 2008-07-14 10:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bigtitch.livejournal.com
Aw, poor Lyle. At least he's getting a good shag out of the deal.

Great fic. Nice beginning for them.

Date: 2008-07-14 10:10 pm (UTC)
ext_27141: (Lyle)
From: [identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com
Very nice (is nice the right word? maybe I should copy D and go for atmospheric!).

And they really have no idea what they'll be getting themselves into next! *g*

Date: 2008-07-14 10:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mysteriousaliwz.livejournal.com
I really do not envy the army some of the things they do.

Nice to see some backstory for Lyle and Sitzy. They don't know what's going to his them ... :)

Date: 2008-07-14 10:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joereaves.livejournal.com
Oh I like this. I do hope Lyle got Ditzy to at the very least buy him a beer in payment for his little underestimation of the dangers of the Forest of Dean.

Date: 2008-07-15 02:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verito295.livejournal.com
This was great! Well as we know I'm totally biased with regards to anything that has to do with Lyle but I really loved the look into their predinosaurs days :)

Date: 2008-07-15 02:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com
Oh wow. Powerful.

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Date: 2008-07-15 06:21 am (UTC)
ext_1004: (Primeval)
From: [identity profile] munchkinofdoom.livejournal.com
*nods* This reminds me a little of recent news reports, of an aussie family over in France watching a WWI mass grave being excavated by forensic archeologists, in the hope their great uncle is in there. The only way to identify the bodies is by dna... *sighs for humanity*

On the other hand, I love Lyle and Ditzy's complete under-estimation of their new job!

Date: 2008-07-15 06:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byrons-brain.livejournal.com
Rope technique!

::shivers::

Great stuff

Date: 2008-07-15 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com
Really intense and powerful. And a neat look forward to the series *g*. Yay for the challenge!

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Date: 2008-07-15 09:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggietate.livejournal.com
To his surprise, the medic nodded. “Forest of Dean, apparently. Makes South Wales or the Mendips a distinct possibility as well. Worst we’re likely to get there is decomposing sheep.”

Little did they know.... :-) Nice fic.

Date: 2008-07-15 09:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rospberry.livejournal.com
Great prelude...poignantly realistic. People do awful things, don't they. Is it wrong that I'm starting to forget that these two guys aren't in the actual series?

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Date: 2008-07-19 01:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] comnena39.livejournal.com
Hmmm... Lyle pre-Lester ...interesting. Chasing dinosaurs must have been a bit of a relief after this case, at least most of the people there are alive and stay that way.

Back stories are great, thanks for letting us know more about the Special Forces cavers.

Date: 2009-01-27 06:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarah-lilzfl.livejournal.com
Oooh. Very powerful! *shivers* I love caves, but I don't think I could go down one that I know would have bodies inside.

"Worst we’re likely to get there is decomposing sheep.”
*snorts* Poor, naive, boy. *snorts again*

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Date: 2009-02-25 10:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Little did Lyle know what he was getting involved in..

Date: 2009-03-23 09:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunsetdawn20.livejournal.com
Big bloody catch with sharp teeth, indeed.

Date: 2010-11-24 11:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neferitiel.livejournal.com
Poor boys! But they'll have good adventures in the Forest of Dean I'm sure :P

Date: 2012-03-18 11:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kerry-louise.livejournal.com
I do like the respect Lyle shows in this fic, he clearly understands the importance of what they're doing.

And of course there is a catch! Isn't there always, lol!

Date: 2014-05-03 04:57 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] goldarrow
Love the interaction between Lyle and Ditzy in this one. And the respect Lyle has for the lost ones.

*shiver* for the body found away from the others, though. So cold and dark for the last few minutes/hours days of life.

Worst we’re likely to get there is decomposing sheep.”
Heh! Ditzy has never been more wrong!

Date: 2014-08-15 10:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hellcats-punk.livejournal.com
A great introduction to these two boys!
By the way can I ask where abouts are they in the world and what cave system are they working at?

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