Drabble, Kisses (3), Nick/Claudia, 15

[fredbassett]

Title : Kisses (3)
Author : fredbassett
Fandom : Primeval
Rating : 15
Characters : Nick/Claudia
Disclaimer : Not mine no money made, don’t sue.
Spoilers : None
Summary : The title’s a giveaway! Written for Primeval100 Challenge 72, Kisses.

Nick Cutter’s lips were surprisingly hesitant.

For a man who normally jumped in without a second thought, he was markedly less decisive in his private life.

Claudia enjoyed surprising him. She’d done it when they’d first met and she was doing it again now.

He wasn’t slow to respond, though, and after the first few moments, he’d deepened the embrace. It wasn’t a suave kiss, or a tidy kiss. It was warm and pleasantly messy, rather like his office. It was a kiss delivered with the passion of one of his lectures.

And like his lectures, it was well received.

Comments

[lukadreaming.livejournal.com]

Excellent -- very Nick! And I love the last line.

Hee -- you haz committed het *bg*.

[fredbassett]

I know, I haz sinned :( The next one is het too. Bad Hound!

[deinonychus-1.livejournal.com]

*Pets Fred* There there, het isn't that bad and scary really.

[deinonychus-1.livejournal.com]

Awww, I love Nick/Claudia. Great drabble.

It wasn’t a suave kiss, or a tidy kiss

Suave and tidy - two things you can never accuse Nick of being!

[fredbassett]

Yep, that's true!

[deinonychus-1.livejournal.com]

BTW, have you forgotten to take this entry off 'date out of order'? I can only see the entry in primeval100 on my f-list, not your journal entry.

[fredbassett]

Thanks, has that cured it?

[deinonychus-1.livejournal.com]

Yep.

[reggietate.livejournal.com]

Oh, excellent! This is really good.

It wasn’t a suave kiss, or a tidy kiss. It was warm and pleasantly messy, rather like his office.

Yup, that's Nick :-)

[fredbassett]

Thanks :) Nick still worries me as a character to write, so I'm glad it worked.

[reggietate.livejournal.com]

You captured him very well. And all you need is practice to make perfect :-)

[telperion-15.livejournal.com]

Awwwwww, this is so *them*

Lovely.

[fredbassett]

Thanks :)

[bigtitch.livejournal.com]

It was warm and pleasantly messy
Another great description. Great drabble.

[fredbassett]

Cheers! Describing different kisses has been quite fun!

[fififolle]

Hee! Lovely. Good drabble.

[fredbassett]

Thanks :)

[rospberry.livejournal.com]

Lovely. That was so perfectly Nick.

[fredbassett]

Glad you liked it!

[rodlox.livejournal.com]

well done on the het!

brava! (or bravo)

[fredbassett]

Thanks! And your comment has reminded me that I still need to do one for Helen!!

[cordeliadelayne]

Aw, lovely descriptions.

[fredbassett]

Thanks :)

[lsellersfic.livejournal.com]

Lovely drabble. Captured Nick perfectly.

[fredbassett]

That's nice to know. He still worries me when I write him, so I like to practice in drabbles.

[byrons-brain.livejournal.com]

adorable!

[fredbassett]

Thanks!

[thefakebook.livejournal.com]

Squee! More Nick/Claudia! I love you, Fred. :-)

[fredbassett]

Thanks!!

[mysteriousaliwz.livejournal.com]

I loved the 'pleasantly messy' line :)

[fredbassett]

It seemed to sum up Nick quite well, so I was pleased with that one :)

[emmademarais.livejournal.com]

Nick/Claudia...
/sigh/

[fredbassett]

*offers cookies*

[sunsetdawn20.livejournal.com]

Haha, I so don't ship them but you really make me tolerate the whole thing. Actually, you almost make me enjoy it. But don't tell anyone. :)

[fredbassett]

*grins* It'll be our secret, hon!

[daxie42.livejournal.com]

This is really cute - I adore the last line :)

[fredbassett]

Thanks :)

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Good description of Nick's kisses.. just like him!

[fredbassett]

I wouldn't mind being on the receiving end of them!

[neferitiel.livejournal.com]

Very very Nick!Claudia!! *.* *sighs*

[fredbassett]

I like these two!