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Title : Falls the Shadow, Part 2
Author : fredbassett

Fandom : Primeval

Characters : Claudia Brown, Ryan, Stephen

Rating : 15

Disclaimer : Not mine, no money made, don’t sue

Spoilers : None.           

Summary : Set after Interrogation Techniques  A group of children are missing.

A/N : The remainder of this series can be found here

Tags : fic, slash, Claudia, Ryan, Stephen

Claudia Brown pulled away from the M6 toll booths and rapidly accelerated to a speed considerably over the legal limit.

Ryan had no complaints about his companion’s driving. Although he was probably the only person in the world who hadn’t, as she was hurtled the car along the motorways with a complete and utter disregard for speed cameras and police cars.

Manchester then Preston passed by in a haze of light pollution.

Lyle and the lads were no more than an hour behind, with Cutter and Connor following closely.

“Junction 36 next,” said Ryan, his voice flat and emotionless. “Follow signs to Kendal.”

This was the most Claudia’d had from him by way of conversation since she’d imparted the news that a group of school children and a teacher had gone missing in Kentmere on a trip to see the golden eagles. The group had included Ryan’s ten year old daughter.

He’d shut down almost instantly. Grey eyes harder and colder than she’d ever seen them, burning with a dangerous intensity. He’d turned on his heel without a word and headed for the door.

To Lester’s credit, he hadn’t even attempted to stop Ryan. He’d simply told Claudia to do the driving then had hit speed dial 2 on his phone and had ordered Lyle, in no uncertain terms, to keep the trouble to a minimum. Those words had followed her down the corridor. Claudia hadn’t found them comforting.

As she brought the car to a halt for only the second time since leaving the Home Office, Claudia understood what Lester had meant.

The woman standing in the brightly lit doorway, eyes red from crying, directed a look of pure poison at Ryan, then turned to the man next to her and ordered, “Greg, call the police, now!”

It had been a long and tiring drive. Claudia stepped forward, trying to radiate a confidence that seemed in very real danger of deserting her in the face of the woman’s obvious hostility.

“Claudia Brown, Home Office. I believe Sir James Lester telephoned earlier. As I’m sure he told you, Mrs Thornton, Captain Ryan is with Professor Cutter’s team. Now, is Dr. Hart here?”

Stephen stepped out of the shadows by the door, his expression as wary as Claudia’s. “I’ve checked the valley with the local police. Some residual magnetism, but nothing I could get much of a fix on.” The look he shot Ryan was apologetic, helpless.

“Cutter and the others will be here within the hour,” said Claudia, doing her best to sound reassuring. “We can check again then.” In the dark, and probably in the rain, but it won’t stop us looking. “Mrs Thornton, may we come in? We will do everything in our power to find your daughter and the others, and your co-operation will help. It would be more discreet if we could base ourselves here, but if not, we can find somewhere in the village. It’s your choice.”

The other man stepped forward, his face white in the light of the ornamental lamps. “I’m Greg Thornton, Ms Brown. We’ve plenty of space for your team here. The police have already set up an incident room in one of the guest cottages. I believe they’ve spoken to your office. Can we get you something to drink first?”

Relief bled into Claudia’s smile. At least he wasn’t openly hostile. “A cup of tea would be most welcome.”

Ryan’s ex-wife stood unmoving, tension radiating from every muscle, her eyes fixed on the soldier, like a mongoose might stare at a snake.

Greg Thornton turned to her, keeping his voice low and calm. “Amanda, Victoria’s Tom’s daughter too, and quite frankly, if he could help us get her back, I’d welcome the Devil himself with open arms. Now come on, inside, please.”

Amanda Thornton quite clearly didn’t agree, but she allowed her husband to take her arm and lead her back inside.

After suffering five minutes of painful sniping, Ryan went off with Stephen in search of the DCI in charge of the local police.

Claudia followed, leaving Amanda Thornton to comment loudly to the young WPC assigned as Family Liaison  Officer, “He used to hit me. That’s why there’s an injunction. I don’t want him involved, no matter what the Home Office says. They can’t make me agree to having him here ………..”

Greg Thornton left with them. Their feet crunched loudly on wet gravel in a well-lit courtyard, but they were still some distance from the house before the shrill, angry tones faded into the darkness.

He turned to Ryan, unease clearly stamped across a thin, good looking face, “I’m sorry, Tom. I can’t pretend to have a bloody clue what’s going on, but nothing on God’s earth will convince Amanda that this isn’t somehow your fault …………” he faltered, looked uncertain, then finished in a rush, “You will find her, won’t you?”

Ryan stared at him without speaking.

It was left to Stephen to fill the gap. The younger man reached out and put a hand lightly on Greg Thornton’s arm, “We’ll find her.” 

But his words were for Ryan, not for the man who was now the stepfather of his lover’s child.

Claudia just hoped Hart was right. But at the moment, it wasn’t looking good.

 

Date: 2008-01-23 10:01 pm (UTC)
ext_27141: (RyanNick)
From: [identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com
Well, I really don't like the ex. What a bitch! "He used to hit me" - yeah whatever...any other delusions you'd like to air while you're at it?

Sorry, you seem to have provoked a rather extreme reaction here... *g*

At least the new husband seems more reasonable.

Date: 2008-01-23 10:44 pm (UTC)
ext_27141: (RyanNick)
From: [identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com
Oh yes, now you've said that I do remember. But I suspect she's been implying it was more than that to get the sympathy vote...

Date: 2008-01-23 10:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bigtitch.livejournal.com
Ooh - tension and real relationships. Loving this one. More, please!
*begs*

Date: 2008-01-24 01:10 am (UTC)
ext_1004: (Primeval)
From: [identity profile] munchkinofdoom.livejournal.com
I pity that poor WPC who's been left with Amanda! And I rather like her new husband. *g*

Your handling of the tension here is wonderful. And starting it off in Claudia's pov was a good idea too.

Am seriously looking forward to more of this!

Date: 2008-01-24 02:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rodlox.livejournal.com
ask Charlie, he might know.

(I think it has something to do with the Ham Sandwich Theorem...Amita's been muttering that all week)

mostly Amita, though the banter is fun too.

Date: 2008-01-24 06:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rodlox.livejournal.com
it helps that I have a copy of Bothamley's Dictionary of Theories.

ps: what happened to Sabrina L(l)oyd? she was in the pilot, working with Don.

Date: 2008-01-24 03:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com
Okay, she's an evil bitch. Also, poor Ryan. But, um, why do I remember Lester already yelling at Ryan for this. Wait, that was for the sheep thing, wasn't it? Poor Ryan.

Date: 2008-01-24 09:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com
It does take two. What impresses me is how they do/do not deal with it afterwards.
I can see how SF would be hard on marriages.

Date: 2008-01-24 08:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
Squeak! Poor Ryan. Ex is definitely a bitch (why am I having visions of locking her in a room with Helen and seeing which one comes out alive?).

Sounds like lots of plot and angst coming up - lovely *happy sigh*.

Would say more, but I just found this at work and don't have much time, sorry.

Date: 2008-01-24 09:25 am (UTC)
ext_27141: (RyanNick)
From: [identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com
Clearly it's twilight zone time again! *whistles appropriate music*

Date: 2008-01-24 01:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
do not fear the plot, the plot is your friend. I have no complaints at all about the possible lack of smut (although having said that, I will, of course, be delighted if there is smut *as well* as plot). Besides, I'm sure S/R can manage at least a little bit of relationship angst in such a stressful situation *grin*. Such things make me happy.

Date: 2008-01-24 11:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
For me, it's the smut that I find the *most* difficult and stressful thing to write. Even the standalone smut ficlets are hard to write, let alone the serious C/R stuff. Maybe your plot bunnies are just particularly obstinate ones. *quitly sneaks extra carrots to Fred's plot bunnies*

"where's the next chapter of 3Y hiding?????"

It's hiding on my harddrive in need of a final edit. I promised it for the weekend, and had been hoping for sooner, but then I had a shit couple of days so it looks like it'll be the weekend after all. *ducks for cover* If it helps at all, the reason that I haven't been editing chapter 6 this week was mostly because I've been writing the first draft of chapters 8 and 9.

Date: 2008-01-24 02:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rodlox.livejournal.com
Helen would put Amanda out of her misery.

(and by 'her' I mean'Helen's')
;)
From: [identity profile] rodlox.livejournal.com
people may call Helen a bitch...but Amanda has earned the moniker.


>and quite frankly, if he could help us get her back, I’d welcome the Devil himself with open arms.
So noted.
*eg*

wait...was that a hint that Helen'll have a hand in saving the kids? would hte "open arms" still apply? ;)

Date: 2008-01-25 03:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spacemonkey-27.livejournal.com
Very nice. And I agree, Ryan's ex is a bitch.

Poor Ryan. *hugs Ryan*

Can't wait to see what happens next. :D

Date: 2008-02-22 02:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dopeydora-67.livejournal.com
Oh dear...Ryan's ex is a right bitch

Date: 2008-03-11 08:27 pm (UTC)
ext_72482: (Default)
From: [identity profile] torncorpse.livejournal.com
I don't think I like Amanda. *shakes head* Nope. Don't like her.

You show her Ryan, and then maybe you can show her what it would be like if you hit her! *grr*

On a side note, Comforting!Stephen is nice. ^^.

I drive like Claudia. On a normal day. *nods* That's me.

Date: 2008-06-02 08:10 pm (UTC)
fififolle: (Chuck 'Stay With Me')
From: [personal profile] fififolle
Now then, where was I? Oh my, this story is going to be a right rollercoaster. Poor Ryan. Did he really hit her? Greg seems okay, thank goodness. Nice driving Claudia. It's even more fun past Kendal ;) Sorry, can't stay, story to keep reading :)

Date: 2008-06-02 08:31 pm (UTC)
fififolle: (SGA - Ladon disinclined)
From: [personal profile] fififolle
Oh yes, that rings a bell. Jeez. It's no fun being a soldier sometimes, poor Ryan. Certainly lends as air of reality to the fic. Mandy is still a b***h.

Date: 2009-02-25 12:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarah-lilzfl.livejournal.com
“Junction 36 next,” said Ryan, his voice flat and emotionless. “Follow signs to Kendall.”
This is going to be my claim to fame, I live near there! :P

Grey eyes harder and colder than she’d ever seen them, burning with a dangerous intensity
Oooooh. Powerful.

“He used to hit me. That’s why there’s an injunction. I don’t want him involved, no matter what the Home Office says. They can’t make me agree to having him here ………..”
Bitch! That's harsh, does she not want her kid back? Umm, I'm biased aren't I? *g*

“I’m sorry, Tom. I can’t pretend to have a bloody clue what’s going on, but nothing on God’s earth will convince Amanda that this isn’t somehow your fault …………” he faltered, looked uncertain, then finished in a rush, “You will find her, won’t you?”
Awwwww, glad to see one of them isn't a bitch.

But at the moment, it wasn’t looking good.
Oh noooo *dashes off to read next part*

Date: 2009-02-25 01:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarah-lilzfl.livejournal.com
LOL I was going to point it out, put didn't for fear you knew something I didn't, and just looked like a nitpicker. *vbg*

Date: 2009-05-15 08:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Grrrr.. Amanda's not going to be popular, is she.

Am slightly curious.. if Lyle's no 2 on Lester's speed dial.. who's no 1?

Date: 2009-05-16 09:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
*snort* just so long as James doesn't get them mixed up..

Date: 2010-12-01 06:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neferitiel.livejournal.com
Poor Ryan!!!! Right now I don't like Amanda either

Date: 2011-12-08 03:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkhorse-99.livejournal.com
I don't know who I hate more, Helen or the X-wife. Helen could have almost been giving a helpful comment, to get the kid out of a an active anomaly zone. But then, Helen doesn't really like to be helpful, does she?

Date: 2012-09-03 11:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kerry-louise.livejournal.com
I know Amanda has her so called 'reasons' but omg bitch!

At least Greg is something like the voice of reason.

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