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Title : Freedom’s Just Another Word For Nothing Left To Lose
Author : fredbassett
Fandom : Primeval
Rating : 18
Characters : Lester
Disclaimer : Not mine no money made, don’t sue.
Spoilers : None
Warning : Mention of rape.
Summary : Written for Primeval100 challenge 123 Freedom, and for [profile] curia_regis, who gave me the title as a prompt.
A/N : Two linked drabbles.

He’d given up marking the bricks on his cell wall to record the passing of time.

He wasn’t sure how long ago that had been.

He’d ceased to commemorate his captor’s visits even longer ago.

One rape blurred into another after only a surprisingly short time.

He’d thought that maybe a tear in his abused flesh would lead to infection, which in turn would end his captivity, but his body had proved more resilient than he would have believed possible.

The gunfire, when it came, stirred long-buried emotions.

Bringing him freedom or death?

He wasn’t even sure he cared anymore.

* * * * *

The shots had been sudden and unexpected. He’d heard shouting, followed by cries of pain and then more shots.

The click of the key in the lock sounded unnaturally loud in the silence that had finally fallen.

The door opened and he stared in fear at the sight of a black-clad figure.

Blue eyes widened in shock, and Captain Ryan’s familiar voice yelled, “Jon! We’ve found him!”

He was escorted from the bunker into long-forgotten sunlight.

Freedom was now a reality, not a dream, but whether it was a reality he had the strength to face was another matter entirely.

Date: 2009-09-11 09:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bella-farfalla.livejournal.com
Oh Lester! *wibbles* Powerful stuff, especially that last line.

Date: 2009-09-11 10:29 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-09-11 10:43 pm (UTC)
fififolle: (Primeval - Lester B&W)
From: [personal profile] fififolle
*shiver*
Wow.... poor Lester... *hides*

Date: 2009-09-11 10:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com
That is *so* bleak and scary. And the last line really packs a punch.

Date: 2009-09-11 10:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verito295.livejournal.com
Argh! Ahh! *whimpers and chews on nails*
Oh meep! *pets James* Lovely written even though our poor James!

Date: 2009-09-11 11:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] auntypam.livejournal.com
Poor Lester at his best, stoic acceptance. Hopefully Jon will take him home and kiss it better. Please?

Date: 2009-09-12 12:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Aww *hugs James*. Hopefully Jon can take him home and make it all better.
Powerful drabbles, esp. the last line.

Date: 2009-09-12 12:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rospberry.livejournal.com
Oh no! Poor, poor Lester.

Date: 2009-09-12 10:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rospberry.livejournal.com
Bad puppy, bad.

Date: 2009-09-12 02:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] echo-fangirl.livejournal.com
Oh Lester! To be so far gone as to wish for a deadly infection... He is definitely in need of some serious snuggles!

Date: 2009-09-12 02:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slashybits.livejournal.com
Powerful and heartbreaking.

*lower lip quivers*

I think you broke me.

Date: 2009-09-12 02:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] talliw.livejournal.com
That was wonderful bleak. The description of the mounting hopelessness was very vividly. And when the rescue finally comes Lester is eventually to far gone already to return to his old life.

Date: 2009-09-12 04:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curia-regis.livejournal.com
I loved this! Especially the last line.

Date: 2009-09-12 07:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bigtitch.livejournal.com
Oh, poor Lester.
a reality he had the strength to face
*hugs the poor lamb*

Date: 2009-09-12 03:13 pm (UTC)
ext_27141: (Lester Phone)
From: [identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com
OUCH.

But it's a good ouch...

Date: 2009-09-12 04:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com
Dark and beautiful!
I'm sure Lester will find the strength to face this new reality. *pets him*

Date: 2009-09-12 06:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggietate.livejournal.com
Eeep! Poor Lester... But yay! for Ryan and Lyle to the rescue! They were noever going to give up.

Date: 2009-09-12 09:59 pm (UTC)
cordeliadelayne: (stand alone stephen)
From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
Oh, eek!

Date: 2009-09-19 07:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunsets-dinos.livejournal.com
Ouch. This is fantastic. Poor Lester.

Date: 2011-02-06 09:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neferitiel.livejournal.com
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek!!! James!!!! I think Ryan must have been seen as an angel that time *.*

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