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Title : Putting Up, Taking Down
Author : fredbassett
Fandom : Primeval
Rating : 12
Characters : Nick (Nick/Helen)
Disclaimer : Not mine, no money made, don’t sue.
Spoilers : None
Summary : Written for [livejournal.com profile] primeval100 Challenge 283, For Sale

Nick stared out his study window watching a post being hammered into the ground.

His heart thumped in his chest with each blow.

The man stepped back to admire his handiwork but Nick turned away and took the stairs two at a time, almost tripping up in his haste.

“Take it down! I’ve changed my mind. I’m sorry, but… take it down, please.”

He couldn’t go through with this.

If Helen returned, she would come here.

He couldn’t sell their home, despite the ever-present reminders of the wife he had loved and lost.

The For Sale sign had to go.

Date: 2012-10-09 11:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com

Meep - I can definitely see this - poor Nick, trying to work out what to do about their home in those circumstances...

Date: 2012-10-09 11:34 am (UTC)
goldarrow: (Default)
From: [personal profile] goldarrow
Sad and sweet, but I do have this little sneaky wish that he had left it *G*...
Very good picture of his torn emotions.

Date: 2012-10-09 11:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] freddiejoey.livejournal.com
Lovely and exactly Nick.

It's why he goes back into that burning building to try and save her too in the end. *sniff*

Date: 2012-10-09 12:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gowarily.livejournal.com
Oh talking of authenticity...... this is just what I was like with my mum's house....
Edited Date: 2012-10-09 12:05 pm (UTC)

Date: 2012-10-09 01:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com
Oh Nick.

Date: 2012-10-09 02:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flaccidduck.livejournal.com
He couldn’t sell their home, despite the ever-present reminders of the wife he had loved and lost.

*hugs Nick*


Date: 2012-10-09 03:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joshinator.livejournal.com
Really sad but also so right!

Date: 2012-10-09 06:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Poor Nick, not able to give up on Helen.

Date: 2012-10-09 07:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
*nods* Nick needed Stephen to take his mind off it.

Date: 2012-10-09 06:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com
This feels totally realistic, that he would be ambivalent about her, despite everything ...

Date: 2012-10-09 06:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggietate.livejournal.com
Alas, that is so very Nick :-( If only he had known...

Date: 2012-10-09 06:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
Oh, poor Nick! *hugs him*

Date: 2012-10-09 06:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com
Oh, yes, very Nick. Poor chap.

Date: 2012-10-09 07:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] judithjohn.livejournal.com
Nick holds on to Helen so long doesn't he????

The heart ruling the head......

Date: 2012-10-09 07:44 pm (UTC)
ext_27141: (Nick Hair)
From: [identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com
Oh, poor Nick, that's definitely a difficult decision to have to make...

Date: 2012-10-09 07:48 pm (UTC)
thelibraniniquity: (Nick Cutter)
From: [personal profile] thelibraniniquity
Oh, Nick. Nicely done!

Date: 2012-10-09 09:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eriah211.livejournal.com
Very realistic and sad. Poor Nick!

Date: 2012-10-10 12:10 am (UTC)
clea2011: (Cutter)
From: [personal profile] clea2011
Poor Nick, he can't quite let go.

Date: 2012-10-10 12:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] natchris.livejournal.com
Nick's my hero.

This is a lovely drabble.

Date: 2012-10-10 12:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamer-98.livejournal.com
Oh, poor Nick. It's understandable he'd have doubts; he still had hope Helen would come back.

Great drabble.

Date: 2012-10-10 06:48 am (UTC)
fififolle: (Primeval - "too old for this s***" Nick)
From: [personal profile] fififolle
Oh, the emotion! God. Great drabble. You have to feel sorry for him.

Date: 2012-10-11 04:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stealingpennies.livejournal.com

Gah, poor Nick. He literally can't move on. *sniffles*

Date: 2012-10-12 05:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ebonyfeather.livejournal.com
Poor Nick- still holding out hope.

Date: 2012-10-21 09:14 pm (UTC)
cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] armed!becker)
From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
Aw, poor deluded Nick.

Date: 2012-12-12 06:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] basched.livejournal.com
Oh! Nick! Bless him so much!

A very sweet but sad little drabble, Fred. Very nice.

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